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Jane2711:

What do you guys think abt this poem? Letting You Go… By: Angela Lainez I keep seeing you in the halls You look at me but never say “Hi” I see how you smile But you smile more than you did with me It’s sad seeing you leave And the way you just ignore me I miss seeing you smile I miss the way you talked to me It hurts when I see you cry But now there are other arms around you Leaving you was my biggest mistake But now all that’s going through my head is you I’m scared to leave you in the past But then all the memories start coming back to me I wish I could bring it all back And feel your touch once again Your’re now in my past And you’re now in someone else’s future You are not mine anymore And now it’s time to let you go

Renne:

I Like it in honesty, And I think you did a great job! Please keep it up! Do more and practice more!

Jane2711:

@renne wrote:
I Like it in honesty, And I think you did a great job! Please keep it up! Do more and practice more!
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Renne:

Ofc!🫠

Alexis1415:

It's so beautiful while being heartfelt and sad, such a way with words, thank you for sharing your feelings and expressing emotion, very beautiful

emilysmith1105:

its good!

Dolphan:

Very good!! Please keep up the wonderful work!!

Flowerpower5290:

I LIKE IT!!

5StarFab:

This poem should be turned into a song.

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