Question

this is what i got so far in my story and im stuck anyone got any ideas
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TOAMABKlt_9DIPO3ASBlsbeoHYSO5iSrmwX3jGIk0Lk/edit?usp=sharing

Answer 1

Love it

Answer 2

I'm guessing you should have it where they wake up in the morning... then see where your mind takes you.

Answer 3

Nicee

Answer 4

i love it babe its so cute

Answer 5

@bravosix I like the story so far. Although, in paragraph 4, it could be expanded upon how the main character felt when Phoenix first emerged at their door. Were they exasperated, discombobulated, or hopeful? It would also be intriguing to perceive how the characters' relationship develops after he returns. Will they be able to work through their issues and be together, or will they ultimately decide to go their separate ways? Adscititiously, integrating more details throughout the story could help immerse the reader in the setting and further bring the story to life.

Answer 6

Cool!

Answer 7

Baby, you know I could help you with your story. Since after all it's about us. I've written a lot of stories and I think I could help more, but it is really good so far.

Answer 8

coolio