Question

Night Continued: By Nate (TBone)

All of my demons wanna come out at night
The bad thoughts always have to come when I'm all alone
The voices get too much
Telling me to do things I would never do
Should I listen?
He doesn't love me
He forget about me
He's moved on
He was sleeping with the one person I overthought about
Why can't the voices just shut up?
Or why can't someone come and save me
Why does all of this have to happen at night?
Everything I overthought about at night came true
The voices get too much, I'm just trying to live my life
Thanks to those voices at night, half of my relationships are ruined
Because I, Overthought
Why does everything have to come out and reveal itself at night?

Answer 1

If everyone could give their honest feedback, that would be appreciated. Thank you.

Answer 2

i love how you used the other pov, very creative!