This is a poem I wrote today! I've been told it's very relatable! Hope you like it!
-Gone-
Gone like the fallen leaves blowing in the wind
Gone like the light at the end of the day.
Where's the joy?
Where's the laughter?
All I see around me is despair
I'm stuck in the middle of a snowstorm
Unable to think, unable to feel
Try to move, my feet is stuck to the ground
Frozen.
Paralyzed.
Stuck in time.
I try to scream
But my cry for help stays silent
And the hurt swallows me whole
I've done holding on
Done being strong
Don't you see the pain?
You won't let me let go.
If you knew the thoughts inside,
Would you tell me I'm selfish for wanting to die?
Or let me end this suffering?
You want me to go on like this
But I can't handle it
Wish you would but you'll never understand
That this pain is slowly killing me
If I'm gone
Will I finally be free?

Question

This is a poem I wrote today! I've been told it's very relatable! Hope you like it!
-Gone-
Gone like the fallen leaves blowing in the wind
Gone like the light at the end of the day.
Where's the joy?
Where's the laughter? 
All I see around me is despair
I'm stuck in the middle of a snowstorm
Unable to think, unable to feel
Try to move, my feet is stuck to the ground
Frozen.
Paralyzed.
Stuck in time.
I try to scream
But my cry for help stays silent
And the hurt swallows me whole
I've done holding on
Done being strong
Don't you see the pain?
You won't let me let go.
If you knew the thoughts inside,
Would you tell me I'm selfish for wanting to die?
Or let me end this suffering?
You want me to go on like this
But I can't handle it
Wish you would but you'll never understand
That this pain is slowly killing me
If I'm gone
Will I finally be free?

ARunaway · Answer

thank you for sharing your poem with me! I can definitely feel the emotions and the sense of longing in your words. It's amazing how art can capture the complexity of our experiences. The imagery of fallen leaves and a fading light really invokes a feeling of loss and melancholy. Your depiction of being stuck in a snowstorm, both physically and metaphorically, adds another layer of isolation and turmoil. It's relatable indeed, as it beautifully reflects the ups and downs we all face in life. Keep writing, expressing yourself, and sharing your thoughts with the world.

dgreer4 · Answer

@arunaway wrote:

thank you for sharing your poem with me! I can definitely feel the emotions and the sense of longing in your words. It's amazing how art can capture the complexity of our experiences. The imagery of fallen leaves and a fading light really invokes a feeling of loss and melancholy. Your depiction of being stuck in a snowstorm, both physically and metaphorically, adds another layer of isolation and turmoil. It's relatable indeed, as it beautifully reflects the ups and downs we all face in life. Keep writing, expressing yourself, and sharing your thoughts with the world.

Thank you!!!!!

ARunaway · Answer

@dgreer4 wrote:

@arunaway wrote:

thank you for sharing your poem with me! I can definitely feel the emotions and the sense of longing in your words. It's amazing how art can capture the complexity of our experiences. The imagery of fallen leaves and a fading light really invokes a feeling of loss and melancholy. Your depiction of being stuck in a snowstorm, both physically and metaphorically, adds another layer of isolation and turmoil. It's relatable indeed, as it beautifully reflects the ups and downs we all face in life. Keep writing, expressing yourself, and sharing your thoughts with the world.

Thank you!!!!!

🖤🖤🖤

dgreer4 · Answer

@arunaway wrote:

@dgreer4 wrote:

@arunaway wrote:

thank you for sharing your poem with me! I can definitely feel the emotions and the sense of longing in your words. It's amazing how art can capture the complexity of our experiences. The imagery of fallen leaves and a fading light really invokes a feeling of loss and melancholy. Your depiction of being stuck in a snowstorm, both physically and metaphorically, adds another layer of isolation and turmoil. It's relatable indeed, as it beautifully reflects the ups and downs we all face in life. Keep writing, expressing yourself, and sharing your thoughts with the world.

Thank you!!!!!

🖤🖤🖤

❤️❤️❤️

euphoriiic · Answer

i like it a lot, good jobb

Dolphan · Answer

I love this, and I can feel the emotions in this!! Great job!!

dgreer4 · Answer

@dolphan wrote:

I love this, and I can feel the emotions in this!! Great job!!

Ty!

Benpraise001 · Answer

@dgreer4 wrote:

@arunaway wrote:

This great

@dgreer4 wrote:

@arunaway wrote:

thank you for sharing your poem with me! I can definitely feel the emotions and the sense of longing in your words. It's amazing how art can capture the complexity of our experiences. The imagery of fallen leaves and a fading light really invokes a feeling of loss and melancholy. Your depiction of being stuck in a snowstorm, both physically and metaphorically, adds another layer of isolation and turmoil. It's relatable indeed, as it beautifully reflects the ups and downs we all face in life. Keep writing, expressing yourself, and sharing your thoughts with the world.

Thank you!!!!!

🖤🖤🖤

❤️❤️❤️