Question

A free write poem/something lol

I still remember the night
The night you asked the question
"What if I kissed you?"
I was so happy
I thought I finally found the one
You treated me so, so good
I felt safe
Secure
I felt warmth with you
I felt like I could be myself
Like I could laugh
And cry with you.
I did.
Plenty of times.
I'm going through the pictures
Videos of you reassuring me
Screenshots of us on videocall
The memories.
How can I forget the memories?
Those were the best 3 months of my life
You don't know how bad, I am hurting.
I'm in pain.
But you don't care
You finally moved on
You will never know how I felt about you.
I finally felt like, someone loved me
I felt like, I could be myself with someone
But now I feel like, you never loved me
I feel like I was just used for a short amount of time
I feel like, we could still make it out of this.
I feel like we could change and come back..
But your never coming back, you left.
I love you, I really do, and nothing, nor anyone can change that about you.

I hope you have a good future, and I hope you can make something out of it.
I hope you find a genuine lover.
Someone who really cares for you, the way I did, possibly better.
I love you..
Goodbye.

Answer 1

Please judge.

Answer 2

Beautifully done. I can feel the emotions you put in from hours away from you, from a screen away from you, and by mere words. You executed this professionally.

Answer 3

Thank you

Answer 4

This was very beautifully written, tho I am not sure what has happened, I still had felt the emotion you put into this through the screen! It’s very empathetic well written<3

Answer 5

this soo beautiful keep up the work<3