Question

Some Poems I've written
"Hide"
Can I hide away the pain,
Hide away the tears,
Hide away the hurt,
You've been causing for years,
Can I hide away the dread,
Hide away the fear,
Hide away the anxiety,
I've been hiding her,
Can I hide away the hate,
Hide away the lies,
Hide away the pain I hold in my eyes...


"Why did you leave me"
Why did you leave me?
Why couldn't you see?
It was just you and me.
Did I do something wrong?
Was everything just a lie all along?
I gave you my heart.
Just for you to take it apart?
Why did you leave me?
Why couldn't you see?
The unbearable pain I'm going through.
Because of you.

"A painful crush"
Why do I have to have a crush?
Just for that crush to like someone else.
Every time I see your face,
My heart begins to race.
I try to hide my feelings deep,
But they always find a way to seep.
The pain of this crush is hard to bear,
It's like a weight I cannot share.
Every smile, every touch, every word,
Is like a dagger in my heart, unheard.
I try to hate them to stop myself from feeling the pain.
But I know it's vain.
Why-why can't I make this stop?


"Smile"
They told me to smile,
Doesn't matter if it's fake.
Told me to hide my pain,
Put on a happy face.
Well I did what they said,
And I did it well.
Till the day came,
Where my smile fell.


"The waters"
It's hard to have hope,
In humanity when,
Even the waves,
Despise each other,
Each pushing the other back,
Keeping it from,
Reaching it's full potential,
If the waters,
Can be so cruel.
How much more of us,
Who have the motive,
And the means,
To do much worse.

Answer 1

Honest thoughts pls

Answer 2

Absolutely beautifully, intelligently, stunning.

Answer 3

Just like you, mi novia.

Answer 4

@devviboihere

Answer 5

@im0ur0baby0 I really like ur poem ur good at writeg e'm could u check out mine and tell me how they are?

Answer 6

fire ashh