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Rosietheboss:

Poem I made for my nefhew

Rosietheboss:

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Rosietheboss:

What do you guys think?

heavenly:

its cute

Rosietheboss:

@heavenly wrote. its cute thx

heavenly:

but its sad bc my baby brother died and i said that to him

Spectrum:

I like it, but sharp teeth?

Rosietheboss:

@Spectrum wrote I like it, but sharp teeth? he bit me and brusied me just with four teeth

5StarFab:

It's great,Keep it up.

Rosietheboss:

Thx

heavenly:

@rosietheboss wrote:
Thx
yw but its sad bc my baby brother died and i said that as he took his last breath

Rosietheboss:

I'm sorry

heavenly:

@rosietheboss wrote:
I'm sorty
its ok

Tsukage:

Nephew* Not nefhew

Flowerpower5290:

cute lol

RodrigoGuevara:

You misspelled "nephew" as someone else pointed out and your poem lacks any punctuation, so it read unnaturally. I'd fix that up before you show it off to him.

heavenly:

its cute

5StarFab:

it sounds country

euphoriiic:

coolio

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