Question

how is my story so far

STALKER

I am walking with my friend at night and I swear i see someone following me “Belladonna!”my friend yells at me which made me jump “fck you scared me Lilly!” I snapped at her with a grin.”whats up with you anyways bell?”lilly asks, coming to my side.”nothing i swear someone was watching me”I said looking around.I hear her giggling “no one is following you bell ur just being paranoid”she says as she walks in front of me.”I am not being paranoid! I swear I saw something!” I yelled at her.Lilly didn't even look at me until we got to her house.
“Look, go home and stop being paranoid.It was just a tree”she said as she shut the door.I went home by myself when I was close to my house I saw them again.”I swear i am not being paranoid he's right there.if she was here she would believe me”I said to myself as i went inside and looked back at my stalker he was gone.The next day at school I saw my high school crush.the mafia leaders son landon.He came over to me and said “you better be careful being outside all alone.I don't want your pretty face to be ruin” landon kissed my cheek and walked off.”How weird…”I said with a slight blush.Then lilly elbowed me on the side.”OoOo you crush kissed your cheek”She giggled.

Answer 1

This is a prett
y cool story!

Answer 2

Did you purposefully write a story of me as the antagonist? REALLY?












[just joking]

Answer 3

lol

Answer 4

This is pretty good!
You trynna publish this?

Answer 5

yeah

Answer 6

Don't forget to use capitalization.

Answer 7

thank u

Answer 8

That's a good story

Answer 9

nice god

Answer 10

i love the story!

Answer 11

nice job i like it

Answer 12

It's a great story. But Ima be honest with you, It doesn't really spark my interest, maybe if you could add a little more "Story", a little more "Life".





Also you gotta work on your grammar skills

Answer 13

i like it