Question

Okay I had to close my previous post to fix a few things, but this is my song and I really like it. What do y'all think?!

Answer 1

**In the Garden of Love**

Verse 1:
The night was dark, but my heart burned bright,
Caught in the spell of a lover's wondrous sight,
His gaze so captivating, his touch so divine,
In the garden of love, he became my lifeline.

Chorus:
In the garden of love, where passion blooms so true,
We danced beneath the moonlight, just me and you,
But a boyfriend before me had left his mark,
Leaving fragile scars upon his tender heart.

Verse 2:
He spoke of heartaches, of love gone astray,
Of tears that fell like raindrops, washing dreams away,
I vowed to be different, to heal those wounds,
In the garden of love, where our futures bloomed.

Chorus:
In the garden of love, where passion blooms so true,
We danced beneath the moonlight, just me and you,
But a boyfriend before me had left his mark,
Leaving fragile scars upon his tender heart.

Bridge:
I strummed my guitar, serenading his soul,
With melodies of devotion, to make his heart whole,
Together we wrote lyrics, rewriting our fate,
Ecstasy unfolding, love without a trace of hate.

Verse 3:
But as time went on, shadows crept in,
Whispers of doubt, the inevitable sin,
Our love became tangled, bruised and unclear,
In the garden of love, where regrets would appear.

Chorus:
In the garden of love, where passion blooms so true,
We danced beneath the moonlight, just me and you,
But a boyfriend before me had left his mark,
Leaving fragile scars upon his tender heart.

Outro:
Now I'm left here singing these melancholic blues,
Wondering if my love was enough to defuse,
The pain of a boyfriend’s past, their ghosts haunt his gaze,
In the garden of love, where a broken heart stays.

Answer 2

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