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Alanaaaaaaa:

"Superheroes" When you've been fighting for it all the time Struggling to make things right as you lie to yourself, That's just how a superhero learns to fly, All the lies she has seen, All the meaner sides he's seen, All the time of trying, When you've been fighting for it all your life, You've been working ever day and night, (Ooo) x3 (Ooo) (Ooo) That how's a superhero learns how to flyyyyyyyyyy, Struggling to make things right, Every night when his mom is mean, Crying every night, That's how a super hero learns his true self, When you've been fighting for it all your light, When your been fighting for it all the time, The time you've given up, You kept going, As a true superhero should.

Midnight97:

Whoa this is amazing keep it up

Alanaaaaaaa:

Thank you

Midnight97:

@alanaaaaaaa wrote:
Thank you
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Shadow5:

hi all

dontmesswitnova:

ONG that was so good

RodrigoGuevara:

You lost me at "Every night when his mom is mean, Crying every night, That's how a super hero learns his true self, When you've been fighting for it all your light." I think you meant "life" instead of "light". Also, you refer to the main person within your poem as a "her" and then a "he" and now I have no idea what the heck this individual is supposed to even be. Overall, the rest of the lyrics were alright.

Wanderlust:

@rodrigoguevara wrote:
You lost me at "Every night when his mom is mean, Crying every night, That's how a super hero learns his true self, When you've been fighting for it all your light." I think you meant "life" instead of "light". Also, you refer to the main person within your poem as a "her" and then a "he" and now I have no idea what the heck this individual is supposed to even be. Overall, the rest of the lyrics were alright.
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KlNGOFTHEMATRlX:

@rodrigoguevara wrote:
You lost me at "Every night when his mom is mean, Crying every night, That's how a super hero learns his true self, When you've been fighting for it all your light." I think you meant "life" instead of "light". Also, you refer to the main person within your poem as a "her" and then a "he" and now I have no idea what the heck this individual is supposed to even be. Overall, the rest of the lyrics were alright.
@froggirlemmy

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