Question

Thoughts by ThatGuyKhi
You say that I don't need to talk
But I must get my point across
What I say, isn't significant?
My lies, stories, opinions, not legitimate
Who are you? Who am I?

To you my thoughts are nothing.
My religion is nothing.
My family,
Friends,
Losses and wins

A fire will continue to burn
Unless an element
That we need
One that flows abundantly
One that sees our mistakes.
Water will decide my fate.

Water
To find was a journey
Crossing rivers
Mountains, trudges, hills
I fought the Devil with a weak will

I won,
The fire is out.
My truth is out
My lies are out
My love, and my hate.
Expression.
Depression.
Are now out

My thoughts are out...
A poem I wrote today about not being heard and be given the ability to have a voice, taking it

Not sure the punctuation is right
Deuces

Answer 1

Haven't made poetry in a while. Forgot how relaxed and calm it makes me.

Answer 2

truly a masterpeace ......

Answer 3

almost makes me wanna sing....































































































STICKING OUT YOUR GYATT FOR THE RIZZLER YOUR SO SKIBIBDI YOUR SO FANOM TAX

Answer 4

really. it's good?

Answer 5

Its really good

Answer 6

Its deep felt, Ill tell you that.
Is this like a poem about overcoming something? either way its deep and I like it
I like the part when it saysYou say that I don't need to talk
But I must get my point across
What I say, isn't significant?
My lies, stories, opinions, not legitimate
Who are you? Who am I?" I can relate to this when I'm trying to talk to something and they're listening but not actually listening yk?
And then at the end,..Water
To find was a journey
Crossing rivers
Mountains, trudges, hills
I fought the Devil with a weak will

I won,
The fire is out.
My truth is out
My lies are out
My love, and my hate.
Expression.
Depression.
Are now out" Is like the relief and victory of having your voice, or over coming these feelings.. I deeply admire this poem
Great Job Velma.

Answer 7

someone*

Answer 8

(:

Answer 9

anyone else?

Answer 10

This is a certified hood classic