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WoahthtsTav:

STUCK I don´t know why im still hurt, still broke Iḿ supposed to be healed ,be free but as i try to speak all you will hear is a cry from me. I try and I try to cover up my pain push back my emotions because i know nothing will be the same. The things that have hurt me i have now broken but i still sit by the happiness train waiting for my token i put on a smile so no one will see how bad I hurt. I push back what im feeling so far back so i can forget still breaking on the inside not knowing how much more pain i can get. I can´t wait until I can get in my dark room and close and lock the door shut trying to find the spots where i cut. Months past I finally feel happy feel free FINALLY FINALLY im now at peace.... How do yall feel about this peom?? 1 through 10??

745967:

what is this

WoahthtsTav:

@745967 wrote:
what is this
A poem idk i never wrote so i thought I´d try it

hunter3506:

Tbh it kinda depressing not but if you could put it in a poem form, I think it would be amazing

WoahthtsTav:

@hunter3506 wrote:
Tbh it kinda depressing not but if you could put it in a poem form, I think it would be amazing
Okay!! ty

hunter3506:

@woahthtstav wrote:
@hunter3506 wrote:
Tbh it kinda depressing not but if you could put it in a poem form, I think it would be amazing
Okay!! ty
Ywc

745967:

@woahthtstav wrote:
@hunter3506 wrote:
Tbh it kinda depressing not but if you could put it in a poem form, I think it would be amazing
Okay!! ty
i feel this poem

hunter3506:

@745967 wrote:
@woahthtstav wrote:
@hunter3506 wrote:
Tbh it kinda depressing not but if you could put it in a poem form, I think it would be amazing
Okay!! ty
i feel this poem
Same but that was a while ago

luhivqqcherry:

when it comes to writing poems you NEED to have stanzas, this poem is also amazing 7/10 .

hunter3506:

@luhivqqcherry wrote:
when it comes to writing poems you NEED to have stanzas, this poem is also amazing 7/10 .
I agree

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