I made a poem named, "Anxiety and love" and it's based around how I experience it and how @williammcgeorge has helped me

Question

OLIVER69 · Answer

With my head hung low
and nowhere to go,

I can't explain
this mysterious pain.

It comes on so fast.
How long will it last?

My heart is just pounding; my head starts to spin.
Please go away; I do not want you in.

I am uncontrollably crying.
It feels like I'm dying.

My body is trembling; my hands start to shake.
I feel so helpless with this horrible ache.

Someone, please help me; make this go away.
I can't stand to feel this way one more day.

Someone, please help me; I am down on my knees.
I am scared and hopes no one sees.

With my head hung low,
someone knows,

I try to explain
this mysterious pain,
and this man knows this pain.

Days go by,
the two bond and a smile rises on my face.
No one understands like him.

I'm happy to have him around me.
Maybe now I'll forget about you.

He's the one helping, not you.
So please don't let me lose him.

Midnight97 · Answer

It looks good dad, keep it up

Midnight97 · Answer

This is honestly how I feel for Ryan, PS your poems are the best

OLIVER69 · Answer

Aww thank you sweetie and yeah I hope he's good

Midnight97 · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

Aww thank you sweetie and yeah I hope he's good

Welcome dad and same here

Delusions · Answer

Nice.

Treeko · Answer

Awesome 👌

snowie · Answer

it's amazing

HotPockets14 · Answer

its good, keep up the work

Williammcgeorge · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

With my head hung low and nowhere to go, I can't explain this mysterious pain. It comes on so fast. How long will it last? My heart is just pounding; my head starts to spin. Please go away; I do not want you in. I am uncontrollably crying. It feels like I'm dying. My body is trembling; my hands start to shake. I feel so helpless with this horrible ache. Someone, please help me; make this go away. I can't stand to feel this way one more day. Someone, please help me; I am down on my knees. I am scared and hopes no one sees. With my head hung low, someone knows, I try to explain this mysterious pain, and this man knows this pain. Days go by, the two bond and a smile rises on my face. No one understands like him. I'm happy to have him around me. Maybe now I'll forget about you. He's the one helping, not you. So please don't let me lose him.

awwww my dear you shall never lose me

OLIVER69 · Answer

Aww good because you're special to me

Williammcgeorge · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

With my head hung low and nowhere to go, I can't explain this mysterious pain. It comes on so fast. How long will it last? My heart is just pounding; my head starts to spin. Please go away; I do not want you in. I am uncontrollably crying. It feels like I'm dying. My body is trembling; my hands start to shake. I feel so helpless with this horrible ache. Someone, please help me; make this go away. I can't stand to feel this way one more day. Someone, please help me; I am down on my knees. I am scared and hopes no one sees. With my head hung low, someone knows, I try to explain this mysterious pain, and this man knows this pain. Days go by, the two bond and a smile rises on my face. No one understands like him. I'm happy to have him around me. Maybe now I'll forget about you. He's the one helping, not you. So please don't let me lose him.

tbh thats the best way to wake up and to see what your husband put

OLIVER69 · Answer

Aww now I'm an idiot smiling and blushing, and I'm glad I could start your day out great

Williammcgeorge · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

Aww now I'm an idiot smiling and blushing, and I'm glad I could start your day out great

awwwww

xcoledd1 · Answer

this is great pls teach me pls

emilioshearts · Answer

@xcoledd1 wrote:

this is great pls teach me pls

why is you lying, blud is making poems on a homework website 💀...

xcoledd1 · Answer

@emilioshearts wrote:

@xcoledd1 wrote:

this is great pls teach me pls

why is you lying, blud is making poems on a homework website 💀...

X_X

Maramaria · Answer

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