thesis statement for ''is seeking revenge productive and beneficial?

Question

5172319 · Answer

@oliver69

OLIVER69 · Answer

Well I remember doing a similar to thing to this for the hook. Now you also want the thesis to be engaging, and doesn't bore your reader right off the bat. In my opinion the thesis is very similar to the hook, except in one sentence.

So an example sentence for this topic can be, "Seeking revenge isn't beneficial or productive, for it can cause break-ups in any relationships, cause harm to oneself and revenge is almost always negative."

I do hope I could help you.

5172319 · Answer

thank you so much!  could you tell me if this sounds okay for the intro paragraph?

5172319 · Answer

is seeking revenge even worth is or is it just dangerous? recent statistics show how 60% of school shootings happen because of revenge. these statistics also showed 20% of homicides care caused by revenge. Seeking revenge isn't beneficial or productive, for it can cause break-ups in any relationships, cause harm to oneself and revenge is almost always negative.

OLIVER69 · Answer

Yes, I do believe that's a good intro paragraph. It's not to wordy and can bring a number of people in without getting bored. Plus, it can help you with your body paragraphs as well, which is important. ^_^

5172319 · Answer

is seeking revenge even worth is or is it just dangerous? recent statistics show how 60% of school shootings happen because of revenge. these statistics also showed 20% of homicides care caused by revenge. Seeking revenge isn't beneficial or productive, for it can cause break-ups in any relationships, c ause harm to oneself  and even cause harm to others. (i changed it )

OLIVER69 · Answer

Either way looks good. And it's important that it suits your writing style, so It's good that you did change it up a little as well.

5172319 · Answer

i have to do a synthesis essay and i was given 3 articles for proof but im still having a hard time trying to start up the 1rst body paragraph

OLIVER69 · Answer

Well for the first paragraph you want to use one of the reasons in your introduction. Either it could be the statistics, the harm it causes or how it can cause breakups... Your thesis for the first body paragraph should be around one of those smaller topics.

5172319 · Answer

thank you i think i have the first body paragraph down.

OLIVER69 · Answer

You're welcome and I'm glad I could help. If you need anymore help just @ me and I'll help. And I trust and know that your first paragraph will be good.