I wrote a sonnet tell me what you think

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toga · Answer

Amidst the mountains, in the fields so green,
Where nature's beauty is a sight to see,
The gentle breeze whispers a calming scene,
And fills my heart with peace and harmony.

The sun sets slowly, painting the sky,
With hues of orange, pink, and shades of blue,
The world around me seems to come alive,
And everything feels pure, serene, and true.

As stars appear, and night begins to fall,
The moon shines bright, and casts its gentle light,
A symphony of sounds, the crickets call,
And all that's left is peace and quiet.

Oh, how I long to stay in this embrace,
And feel the wonders of this beautiful space.

RhianaB112 · Answer

i like it

skyler420 · Answer

@rhianab112 wrote:

i like it

ongg looks good

RhianaB112 · Answer

@skyler420 wrote:

@rhianab112 wrote:

i like it

ongg looks good

yes it does

toga · Answer

@rhianab112 wrote:

i like it

thank you

toga · Answer

@rhianab112 wrote:

@skyler420 wrote:

@rhianab112 wrote:

i like it

ongg looks good

yes it does

thanks

RhianaB112 · Answer

np anytime i really like it

Midnight97 · Answer

Whoa that is good, keep it up toga

snowie · Answer

Its amazing keep up the hard work

veveveve · Answer

Well done, toga. I love it.

Aliciaa · Answer

love it