Question

should I make a song about this I don't know what else I should add to it tho.
The song name would be toxic

Toxic
I need a new life
I need a new life
Someone help me
All my friends are toxic
All ambition so cruel and so negative
It's not quick and easy
Someone come find me
life would be so much better
I could be free
no one has to control me
and can be with someone I want
all my friends are toxic
all ambition so cruel and so negative
I need new friends but it's not that quick and easy someone come and find me

Answer 1

This is very good, keep it up!

Answer 2

should I make it a song @toga

Answer 3

You should make it a song

Answer 4

Do it

Answer 5

I don't think this should be named toxic. Maybe if you wanted someone named toxic it should be more abusive and cruel?

Answer 6

But so far this is amazing.

Answer 7

I do think you should make this a song, but I don't think it should be named Toxic if you do. There's already a song out there named Toxic, and you would want your song to be unique. If I was you, I would name it, "Escaping the Toxicity." You don't have to, but it's just a thought. And it's really good so far too.

Answer 8

I lived a horrible life, I’ve been mistreated and used
I hate my life, please let it end
I want a new life, I want to start over
Can someone help me, can someone hear my pain calls
All my friends are toxic and my family hates me
Why are ambition so cruel, so negative, why do we need ambition
It's not quick and easy, but I’ll get it done
Someone come find me, someone come end me
life would be so much better if I wasn’t here
I could be free, like a bird
no one has to control me, I don’t have to be control
and can be with someone I want like my dreams
All my friends are toxic and my family hates me
Why are ambition so cruel, so negative, why do we need ambition
It's not quick and easy, but I’ll get it done
I need new friends but it's not that quick and easy
someone come and find me