Another thing im working on..

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uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

This is what we get tryna repair broken souls let em in too deep and they push you out this is where the demons come
drag you from beneath who knew you could turn into a snake from manipulation and trauma you cant handle to a  messed up kid  in this world you gotta find
someone to believe in oh can i count on you? Or you just another snake?
Whats this world come to making me realize the truth behind all this betrayal that the snake wasnt you but me
Howd it get this far? Howd i let myself go
Have i been like this nobody knows but god
I jus wanna be different wanna be different..
I hate letting you down cant let you go
Please just come back
Gimmie one last chance
If its not too late i apologize now

YOUNGBALLER · Answer

mmmm, nice

YOUNGBALLER · Answer

keep up the good work, mate

Fz150 · Answer

Lowkey relatable. Let the same snake bite me multiple times cuz i figured they would change.
“Gotta someone to believe in oh can i count on you? Or you just another snake?”
So real. Keep up the great work and post the finished song.

karissafrazier · Answer

if u ever need to talk child im here <3

uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

@karissafrazier wrote:

if u ever need to talk child im here <3

Nothing u can fix but i think ima be just fine 🥹🙏

xnonangiex · Answer

noice

MAGABACK · Answer

That is rlly good! I honestly could not do this.

ShadowWolf95 · Answer

This is very good, keep it up

euphoriiic · Answer

I love itt, good job abs 🫶🏻.

Rosee5656 · Answer

It's great, and I honestly love it tbh

TinydinoUwU · Answer

Love it

snowie · Answer

it's beautiful i love it 10/10 keep up the good work

Manny300303199 · Answer

its great. and very relatable

xnonangiex · Answer

noiceeee

uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

Tanks guys means alot 🥹🙏

Ylynnaa · Answer

its very great

velmalovesshaggy145 · Answer

@uknownprttyfacekayla Are you ok?

sxlvergxge · Answer

This is a really amazing display of emotion and It really shows. The way that you show the harshness of how you feel towards the metaphorical 'snake' is really important to how you write this and I feel that it was done really well!

The verse at the end is also nice! I think that it tells the reader that both sides had some sort of negative event or some sort of argument, or something worse. It's like the speaker who wrote this is remorseful for something they did or said. And I really congratulate you for pouring so much of your soul into this, It was written so well.

uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

@velmalovesshaggy145 wrote:

@uknownprttyfacekayla Are you ok?

Yessss