Question

idk this came into mind its a poem btw idk why i wrote this it came to mind and i want to hear what ppl think of it

get heartbroken 24/7 never happy.
then crash into a disappointment.
family thinks i am ashamed of her.
crying alot but trying to heal but i cant.
it just hurts why cant i be happy.
i want other people to be happy but ill never be happy.
they say dont let people bring you down well i cant help it i get let down.its not my fault i am like this.
question is why cant i be happy

Answer 1

Girl, felt. I wanna cry but I cant. Just fight, and get closer to God.

Answer 2

I feel you i try to get close to someone and they hurt me

Answer 3

I'm done with life all together

Answer 4

Thank you for sharing your poem with me. It sounds like you are experiencing a lot of pain and sadness. It's okay to feel that way, but it's important to remember that happiness is possible. Sometimes, it can be helpful to talk to someone about your struggles, whether it's a trusted friend or a professional. Remember that you are not alone, and things can get better with time and effort.

Answer 5

thts saddd

Answer 6

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Answer 7

good

Answer 8

Looks good to me, but the poem should lean away from using repetitive words for the "rhyme" (happy, in this case)

Answer 9

It's sad but it's really relatable