honest opinion
Why
Why am i here
I'm here yet you don't care
Why don't you care

You left me right here
You just don’t care
Why don’t you care
What did i do

Why did you just act like i was something
Something on display
A one time thing
You changed the way i thought of life

You said we were forever
Yet you left me in despair
If i changed
Would you still be by my side

Caring for me
Not ever leaving me be
By myself
I am alone

Alone in this lonely home
If i changed
I would not be alone
Alone forever

In this lonely home
Sitting in silence
As time passes
I start to grow old alone

Question

honest opinion 
Why 
Why am i here
I'm here yet you don't care
Why don't you care

You left me right here
You just don’t care
Why don’t you care
What did i do

Why did you just act like i was something
Something on display
A one time thing
You changed the way i thought of life

You said we were forever
Yet you left me in despair
If i changed
Would you still be by my side

Caring for me
Not ever leaving me be
By myself
I am alone

Alone in this lonely home
If i changed 
I would not be alone
Alone forever

In this lonely home
Sitting in silence
As time passes
I start to grow old alone

UwUJeremiahUwU · Answer

Nice, I love how this is the emotions that I am exactly feeling. This has so much thought into it. Great masterpiece! Honestly, I don't know why people are not clicking on this.

UwUJeremiahUwU · Answer

@uwujeremiahuwu wrote:

Nice, I love how this is the emotions that I am exactly feeling. This has so much thought into it. Great masterpiece! Honestly, I don't know why people are not clicking on this.

I went through a break up, and this is exactly how I felt and how I feel right at the moment.

gingy57016 · Answer

@uwujeremiahuwu wrote:

Nice, I love how this is the emotions that I am exactly feeling. This has so much thought into it. Great masterpiece! Honestly, I don't know why people are not clicking on this.

I went through a break up, and this is exactly how I felt and how I feel right at the moment.

I'm sorry to hear

UwUJeremiahUwU · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

@uwujeremiahuwu wrote:

Nice, I love how this is the emotions that I am exactly feeling. This has so much thought into it. Great masterpiece! Honestly, I don't know why people are not clicking on this.

I went through a break up, and this is exactly how I felt and how I feel right at the moment.

I'm sorry to hear

It's for the best. I was just a little naive at that point.

UwUJeremiahUwU · Answer

@uwujeremiahuwu wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

@uwujeremiahuwu wrote:

Nice, I love how this is the emotions that I am exactly feeling. This has so much thought into it. Great masterpiece! Honestly, I don't know why people are not clicking on this.

I went through a break up, and this is exactly how I felt and how I feel right at the moment.

I'm sorry to hear

It's for the best. I was just a little naive at that point.

But now I know, I have to just be myself, and not let anyone get to me, even if its hard to ignore.

YOUNGBALLER · Answer

nice

gingy57016 · Answer

@youngballer wrote:

nice

ty

YOUNGBALLER · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

@youngballer wrote:

nice

ty

ur welcome, mates

MAGABACK · Answer

I think itz amazing. keep em coming. :)

gingy57016 · Answer

@magaback wrote:

I think itz amazing. keep em coming. :)

tysm

MAGABACK · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

@magaback wrote:

I think itz amazing. keep em coming. :)

tysm

np. :)

Manny300303199 · Answer

Y'all so emo

Manny300303199 · Answer

But I do like it

euphoriiic · Answer

@manny300303199 wrote:

Y'all so emo

i'm saying

gingy57016 · Answer

@euphoriiic wrote:

@manny300303199 wrote:

Y'all so emo

i'm saying

the point of the poem is feelings after a break up ma'am/sir

euphoriiic · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

@euphoriiic wrote:

@manny300303199 wrote:

Y'all so emo

i'm saying

the point of the poem is feelings after a break up ma'am/sir

ok

gingy57016 · Answer

@euphoriiic wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

@euphoriiic wrote:

@manny300303199 wrote:

Y'all so emo

i'm saying

the point of the poem is feelings after a break up ma'am/sir

ok

ty for your feedback though

euphoriiic · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

@euphoriiic wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

@euphoriiic wrote:

@manny300303199 wrote:

Y'all so emo

i'm saying

the point of the poem is feelings after a break up ma'am/sir

ok

ty for your feedback though

ok

Fz150 · Answer

Cool poem. Very heart felt and raw emotions here! Also key reminder, don’t let anyone tell you your poem isn’t good or whatever hatred they may bring towards you:) They’re just immature, and have nothing better to do except bring the negativity from their own trash lives onto others to make themselves feel better. Anyways, keep up the writing; it’s a great method of coping. Remember, every tunnel of darkness has an ending of light. Pain is temporary. Keep it up🥱

gingy57016 · Answer

@fz150 wrote:

Cool poem. Very heart felt and raw emotions here! Also key reminder, don’t let anyone tell you your poem isn’t good or whatever hatred they may bring towards you:) They’re just immature, and have nothing better to do except bring the negativity from their own trash lives onto others to make themselves feel better. Anyways, keep up the writing; it’s a great method of coping. Remember, every tunnel of darkness has an ending of light. Pain is temporary. Keep it up🥱

Thank you so much

Manny300303199 · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

@euphoriiic wrote:

@manny300303199 wrote:

Y'all so emo

i'm saying

the point of the poem is feelings after a break up ma'am/sir

Ok

gingy57016 · Answer

@manny300303199 wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

@euphoriiic wrote:

@manny300303199 wrote:

Y'all so emo

i'm saying

the point of the poem is feelings after a break up ma'am/sir

Ok

not meant to be emo but ty for your honest opinion

Manny300303199 · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

@manny300303199 wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

@euphoriiic wrote:

@manny300303199 wrote:

Y'all so emo

i'm saying

the point of the poem is feelings after a break up ma'am/sir

Ok

not meant to be emo but ty for your honest opinion

Ok

Fz150 · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

@fz150 wrote:

Cool poem. Very heart felt and raw emotions here! Also key reminder, don’t let anyone tell you your poem isn’t good or whatever hatred they may bring towards you:) They’re just immature, and have nothing better to do except bring the negativity from their own trash lives onto others to make themselves feel better. Anyways, keep up the writing; it’s a great method of coping. Remember, every tunnel of darkness has an ending of light. Pain is temporary. Keep it up🥱

Thank you so much

No problem

GothgirlLillian · Answer

Because girly why not

4uDr1 · Answer

@tdotty

Tech1289 · Answer

emo

gingy57016 · Answer

@tech1289 wrote:

emo

oh ty for your honest opinion!

KatelynGrace · Answer

i feel it and good job on it

wasthatthebiteof87 · Answer

This is great! Although, I'd love to see more variation in the rhymes/words.

gingy57016 · Answer

@wasthatthebiteof87 wrote:

This is great! Although, I'd love to see more variation in the rhymes/words.

yeah sorry I will do my best next time

wasthatthebiteof87 · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

@wasthatthebiteof87 wrote:

This is great! Although, I'd love to see more variation in the rhymes/words.

yeah sorry I will do my best next time

its alr! dont take it to heart, you are really good! hope to see more of your work in the future :)

gingy57016 · Answer

@wasthatthebiteof87 wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

@wasthatthebiteof87 wrote:

This is great! Although, I'd love to see more variation in the rhymes/words.

yeah sorry I will do my best next time

its alr! dont take it to heart, you are really good! hope to see more of your work in the future :)

thank you so much

KarmaXD · Answer

so many people have deep thoght why they are its sad