Fake story!! The backstory of the story: A girl named Saniya had a boyfriend so the scene of the writing is about her boyfriend leaving her after a 5 month relationship...

*Saniya comes back from work*

Boyfriend: "Hey, we have to talk.."

Saniya: "Sure, about what?"

Boyfriend: "Well I've been thinking.. It's not going to work out."

Saniya: "I told you the microwave wasn't work again."

Boyfriend: "I'm not talking about the microwave..."

Part 2 coming soon

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Fake story!! The backstory of the story: A girl named Saniya had a boyfriend so the scene of the writing is about her boyfriend leaving her after a 5 month relationship...

*Saniya comes back from work*

Boyfriend: "Hey, we have to talk.."

Saniya: "Sure, about what?"

Boyfriend: "Well I've been thinking.. It's not going to work out."

Saniya: "I told you the microwave wasn't work again."

Boyfriend: "I'm not talking about the microwave..."

Part 2 coming soon

luhbabyliyahh · Answer

What do you think? Should I do a part 2?🤔

Thayes · Answer

yea

luhbabyliyahh · Answer

@thayes wrote:

yea

Okay!

hellokitty265 · Answer

ooop

luhivqqcherry · Answer

I think this story has lots of potential to become better , some tips are to add more words (like dialogue and scenery for an example describing the setting) for readers to engage more, like this part 1 where we are left on a cliff hanger !! add more of that , make sure to write some more details to really hook us in !! .

luhbabyliyahh · Answer

@luhivqqcherry wrote:

I think this story has lots of potential to become better , some tips are to add more words (like dialogue and scenery for an example describing the setting) for readers to engage more, like this part 1 where we are left on a cliff hanger !! add more of that , make sure to write some more details to really hook us in !! .

Thank you, Part 2 is gonna be better

luhivqqcherry · Answer

@luhbabyliyahh wrote:

@luhivqqcherry wrote:

I think this story has lots of potential to become better , some tips are to add more words (like dialogue and scenery for an example describing the setting) for readers to engage more, like this part 1 where we are left on a cliff hanger !! add more of that , make sure to write some more details to really hook us in !! .

Thank you, Part 2 is gonna be better

ahh I can't waitt !! .

OppStoppax · Answer

@luhbabyliyahh wrote:

What do you think? Should I do a part 2?🤔

Can part two, be me and you?

luhbabyliyahh · Answer

@oppstoppax wrote:

@luhbabyliyahh wrote:

What do you think? Should I do a part 2?🤔

Can part two, be me and you?

lemme think about it

luhbabyliyahh · Answer

UPDATE:
Part 2 at 12:43 Central Daylight Time

luhbabyliyahh · Answer

2:43 in pst and 11:43 in est time zone

Manny300303199 · Answer

looks great could use slight improvement but overall great job

luhbabyliyahh · Answer

@l8rval wrote:

REPLY 2 ME

Hello!

luhbabyliyahh · Answer

@manny300303199 wrote:

looks great could use slight improvement but overall great job

Okay ty

hellokitty265 · Answer

womp

luhbabyliyahh · Answer

@hellokitty265 wrote:

womp

dont be coming in my comments starting things

GoatyGoat · Answer

REPLY TO ME

luhbabyliyahh · Answer

Part 2 in up!!!!!!!

GoatyGoat · Answer

REPLY TO ME PLEASE