rate my poem (:

My heart is hurt
Hurt to the point of no return
Hurt to not forgiving
Hurt to never forgetting

Hurt to the point I don’t want to be here
Here is the place I feel alone
Yet I don’t want to leave
No matter how bad it hurts

I’m not sure what is wrong with me
It’s like this pain that I have feeds me
Feeds like food feeds humans
But this feels weird

-gingy

Question

rate my poem (:

My heart is hurt
Hurt to the point of no return
Hurt to not forgiving
Hurt to never forgetting

Hurt to the point I don’t want to be here
Here is the place I feel alone
Yet I don’t want to leave
No matter how bad it hurts

I’m not sure what is wrong with me
It’s like this pain that I have feeds me
Feeds like food feeds humans
But this feels weird

-gingy

GoatyGoat · Answer

Hurt Hurt hurt 8/10

RhianaB112 · Answer

i like it a lot Keep up the work 10/10

gingy57016 · Answer

@rhianab112 wrote:

i like it a lot Keep up the work 10/10

ty

gingy57016 · Answer

@goatygoat wrote:

Hurt Hurt hurt 8/10

I will try harder next time (:

RhianaB112 · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

@rhianab112 wrote:

i like it a lot Keep up the work 10/10

ty

yw

GoatyGoat · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

@goatygoat wrote:

Hurt Hurt hurt 8/10

I will try harder next time (:

Noo it good Your doing a good job just keep the good work up

gingy57016 · Answer

@goatygoat wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

@goatygoat wrote:

Hurt Hurt hurt 8/10

I will try harder next time (:

Noo it good Your doing a good job just keep the good work up

I will tysm

GoatyGoat · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

@goatygoat wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

@goatygoat wrote:

Hurt Hurt hurt 8/10

I will try harder next time (:

Noo it good Your doing a good job just keep the good work up

I will tysm

Your welcome

DorianIsHere · Answer

9/10 
keep it up. i cant write a poem if i tried

gingy57016 · Answer

@dorianishere wrote:

9/10 keep it up. i cant write a poem if i tried

practice makes perfect

DorianIsHere · Answer

for real

L8RVAL · Answer

9/10 it just needs a little bit of improving

gingy57016 · Answer

@l8rval wrote:

9/10 it just needs a little bit of improving

ty for your honesty

L8RVAL · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

@l8rval wrote:

9/10 it just needs a little bit of improving

ty for your honesty

Yw anytime

hannahj · Answer

Its good

gingy57016 · Answer

@hannahj wrote:

Its good

ty

hannahj · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

@hannahj wrote:

Its good

ty

Yw ♡

Bounty · Answer

its nice i like it has a lot of feeling and emotion kinda lets people connect with it u should try and make it more descriptive like adding surroundings and thinking rlly hard about ur feelings as u write

L8RVAL · Answer

@bounty wrote:

its nice i like it has a lot of feeling and emotion kinda lets people connect with it u should try and make it more descriptive like adding surroundings and thinking rlly hard about ur feelings as u write

Why don't you post your other poems?

Bounty · Answer

@l8rval wrote:

@bounty wrote:

its nice i like it has a lot of feeling and emotion kinda lets people connect with it u should try and make it more descriptive like adding surroundings and thinking rlly hard about ur feelings as u write

Why don't you post your other poems?

to dark

Lilly2010 · Answer

It's very good,i feel like it shows how you feel. I personally connect with it. 10/10 keep up the good work. Good job!

gingy57016 · Answer

@lilly2010 wrote:

It's very good,i feel like it shows how you feel. I personally connect with it. 10/10 keep up the good work. Good job!

tysm ^^

Lilly2010 · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

@lilly2010 wrote:

It's very good,i feel like it shows how you feel. I personally connect with it. 10/10 keep up the good work. Good job!

tysm ^^

ofc

Daisy1234 · Answer

Bad

gingy57016 · Answer

@daisy1234 wrote:

Bad

oh why?

abdultahir2 · Answer

nah that was good fr fr

GoatyGoat · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

@daisy1234 wrote:

Bad

oh why?

Hater.

Lilly2010 · Answer

@goatygoat wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

@daisy1234 wrote:

Bad

oh why?

Hater.

thats so meann wth u hatin

GoatyGoat · Answer

@lilly2010 wrote:

@goatygoat wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

@daisy1234 wrote:

Bad

oh why?

Hater.

thats so meann wth u hatin

Lilly ain't dat yo sister

Daisy1234 · Answer

@goatygoat wrote:

@lilly2010 wrote:

@goatygoat wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

@daisy1234 wrote:

Bad

oh why?

Hater.

thats so meann wth u hatin

Lilly ain't dat yo sister

It's emo as.f

gingy57016 · Answer

@daisy1234 wrote:

@goatygoat wrote:

@lilly2010 wrote:

@goatygoat wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

@daisy1234 wrote:

Bad

oh why?

Hater.

thats so meann wth u hatin

Lilly ain't dat yo sister

It's emo as.f

if you don't like it you don't have to read it but it is how I feel sir/ma'am

GoatyGoat · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

@daisy1234 wrote:

It a female and trust they just hating you did good

@goatygoat wrote:

@lilly2010 wrote:

@goatygoat wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

@daisy1234 wrote:

Bad

oh why?

Hater.

thats so meann wth u hatin

Lilly ain't dat yo sister

It's emo as.f

if you don't like it you don't have to read it but it is how I feel sir/ma'am

Lilly2010 · Answer

@goatygoat wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

@daisy1234 wrote:

It a female and trust they just hating you did good

@goatygoat wrote:

@lilly2010 wrote:

@goatygoat wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

@daisy1234 wrote:

Bad

oh why?

Hater.

thats so meann wth u hatin

Lilly ain't dat yo sister

It's emo as.f

if you don't like it you don't have to read it but it is how I feel sir/ma'am

Sadly yes she is my sister,and i'm sorry she is always so rude. And ong i personally thought it was beautiful. Just ignore her she emo nd rude asl

GoatyGoat · Answer

@lilly2010 wrote:

@goatygoat wrote:

Lemme tap like a one night stand

@gingy57016 wrote:

@daisy1234 wrote:

It a female and trust they just hating you did good

@goatygoat wrote:

@lilly2010 wrote:

@goatygoat wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

@daisy1234 wrote:

Bad

oh why?

Hater.

thats so meann wth u hatin

Lilly ain't dat yo sister

It's emo as.f

if you don't like it you don't have to read it but it is how I feel sir/ma'am

Sadly yes she is my sister,and i'm sorry she is always so rude. And ong i personally thought it was beautiful. Just ignore her she emo nd rude asl

Alexthebeaner · Answer

@goatygoat wrote:

@lilly2010 wrote:

@goatygoat wrote:

Lemme tap like a one night stand

@gingy57016 wrote:

@daisy1234 wrote:

It a female and trust they just hating you did good

@goatygoat wrote:

@lilly2010 wrote:

@goatygoat wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

@daisy1234 wrote:

Bad

oh why?

Hater.

thats so meann wth u hatin

Lilly ain't dat yo sister

It's emo as.f

if you don't like it you don't have to read it but it is how I feel sir/ma'am

Sadly yes she is my sister,and i'm sorry she is always so rude. And ong i personally thought it was beautiful. Just ignore her she emo nd rude asl

oop

jessistocutelol · Answer

so pretty

gingy57016 · Answer

@jessistocutelol wrote:

so pretty

tysm (: