i wrote this
why am I still here darkness feels like the night sitting alone in darkness not feeling or seeing a thing the present feels uncombable alone in silence why me yes people near yes they are they come and go am I a ghost to them no one sees or do I am there in their eyes but they don't care wonders wonder nowhere to go but stay in the darkness of it all with the light come around wish it does but would it or not

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i wrote this 
why am I still here darkness feels like the night sitting alone in darkness not feeling or seeing a thing the present feels uncombable alone in silence why me yes people near yes they are they come and go am I a ghost to them no one sees or do I am there in their eyes but they don't care wonders wonder nowhere to go but stay in the darkness of it all with the light come around wish it does but would it or not

Breathless · Answer

Good! keep it up!

KatelynGrace · Answer

@breathless wrote:

Good! keep it up!

thx u

Breathless · Answer

ywwwwww

Bones · Answer

I feel every word in this, good job and keep it up!  ✨ ✨ ✨

luhivqqcherry · Answer

i see little potential in this poem, i feel like this could've been better, you need more punctuation, i literally read this poem and it barely made sense. You have incomplete thoughts, and unclear incorrect word usage throughout the whole thing.

KatelynGrace · Answer

@luhivqqcherry wrote:

i see little potential in this poem, i feel like this could've been better, you need more punctuation, i literally read this poem and it barely made sense. You have incomplete thoughts, and unclear incorrect word usage throughout the whole thing.

thxs i not a good speller but thx for the head up

KatelynGrace · Answer

@bones wrote:

I feel every word in this, good job and keep it up! ✨ ✨ ✨

thxs

Bones · Answer

@katelyngrace wrote:

@bones wrote:

I feel every word in this, good job and keep it up! ✨ ✨ ✨

thxs

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