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lcamilal:

I don't relate to this but I see poetry all the time on here so I just wrote something. Do I have A Choice? It's hard. Waking up putting on a mask only to discard. Is it worth it? Revealing clothing and bras that don't fit. Do I have a choice? Changing myself to impress the boys? It doesn't feel like it. They say beauty is pain but even when I take the mask off the pain still won't go away. They say to be confident, then point out all of your flaws. I don't even know myself anymore. Not a little, not a bit, not even at all. They tell me to do or say things that I normally wouldn't. I do things to fit in even though I know I shouldn't. “But it takes the pain away” No it doesn't. Because when I see my reflection it still feels like I'm missing something.

Breathless:

OvO Bro when I was reading this

Breathless:

I just thought it as a rapping song

lcamilal:

@breathless wrote:
I just thought it as a rapping song
BAHAHA NO CUS SAME

Breathless:

BUT it's rlly good!

Breathless:

you should turn this into a song B)

lcamilal:

@breathless wrote:
you should turn this into a song B)
NO CUS I WAS THINKING ABOUT IT

Breathless:

like that one part "but it takes my pain away" that's like a break in the music then you say no it doesn't And continue Rapping ong

lcamilal:

bro istg ur reading my mind

Breathless:

cuz great minds think alike Ong ong ong

GRIZZLEY19:

DAMN THATS HELLA GOOD I LIKE IT 12/10

lcamilal:

frr

lcamilal:

thank youuuu : )

GRIZZLEY19:

NP

Breathless:

lol

SaltySuga:

THIS IS SO GOOD

Breathless:

BRO THEN AFTER

lcamilal:

AHHHHH STOP TYY

Breathless:

Nvm

Breathless:

I lost my brain-

jayfafr:

sad as nga

lcamilal:

I said I didn't relate love ; (

lcamilal:

lets read before we type

Breathless:

ong

lcamilal:

BRO I GOT A TAT

alphaXtiger:

cool

Breathless:

ngl

whyjustwhy:

kiss

alphaXtiger:

@whyjustwhy wrote:
kiss
w PFP

Breathless:

you should Add smth with a am I even relevant line

lcamilal:

I wanted to keep it short Incase it came on the wrong side of people

Breathless:

Lol

MAGABACK:

Wait. did u create this??????????

lcamilal:

@magaback wrote:
Wait. did u create this??????????
YESSSS

laylapoisonous:

I love it OMG!!

KyledaGreat:

Wow, that was actually really deep. Props to you for writing something so personal. I can tell it took a lot of courage to share that. It must be really tough always feeling like you have to change yourself or hide who you are to fit what others think is "cool" or "pretty". No one should ever make you feel bad about yourself, especially over stuff as dumb as looks or clothes. What really matters is who you are on the inside. I know it's not easy, but try not to let anyone make you question your self worth - you seem like an awesome girl just the way you are! Screw people who try to bring you down, just focus on surrounding yourself with friends who like you for YOU. And don't be afraid to just be yourself, your true friends will love that side of you too. Hang in there, it does get better - just keep being your awesome self no matter what anyone else says!

forgetmylife:

Its good ngl keep at it

lcamilal:

@kyledagreat wrote:
Wow, that was actually really deep. Props to you for writing something so personal. I can tell it took a lot of courage to share that. It must be really tough always feeling like you have to change yourself or hide who you are to fit what others think is "cool" or "pretty". No one should ever make you feel bad about yourself, especially over stuff as dumb as looks or clothes. What really matters is who you are on the inside. I know it's not easy, but try not to let anyone make you question your self worth - you seem like an awesome girl just the way you are! Screw people who try to bring you down, just focus on surrounding yourself with friends who like you for YOU. And don't be afraid to just be yourself, your true friends will love that side of you too. Hang in there, it does get better - just keep being your awesome self no matter what anyone else says!
I said I didn't relate to it but thank you : )

YouInFocus:

dang that is so raw and relatable. you really captured the struggle of fitting in and feeling lost.

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