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If God cared why he doing this to me,
Pain, Abusive, Sorrow, Deaths, Suicide,Drugs,Insomnia

If God cared why he take away everything that means the most to me,

If God cared and he knew I needed them and still do why are they gone?

If God knew I need them why did he take them,

If God knew this was to happened then why he make me go through the pain,

If God knew the pain I feel then why doesn't he heard my screams,

If God knew the screams I would scream then why does he just sit there and watch me go through the pain of the nightmares that replay in my head everytime I close my eyes,

If he knew the screams and the tears that come then why does he just stand by and hear my screams and walk away,

If God knew then why doesn't he help me when I reach for him to save me and I end up dying inside myself,

If God knew I was dying inside and just stood there listening to my pleases, screams,tears,and shouts,

If God knew the pain then why all I care about is being dead and wanting to end every pain I feel inside that's locked away from this world,

If God knew the way I would lock away every emotions and that wounds me and makes me go deeper into darkness,

If God cared then why isnt he saving me from the hurt and pain I'm feeling inside?

Answer 1

Might put the title as broken emotion of suffering I don’t k ow let me know a good title.

Answer 2

You could call it, 'If God Knew, 'Silent Please', or "When God Stands Silent.' I don't know if this is just a poem or if you truly feel this way, but when you have these thoughts or questions, ask yourself, why are you feeling this way? What happens to make you feel this way? For example, you said, "If God knew this was to happen, why he make me go through the pain?" God has a plan and somewhere down the road in your life, they're well a time when all that pain, anguish, and self-doubt will all come out onto something or someone who deserves it. Even for everything else that is going on, shootings, cancer, E.T.C, later in life there will be someone who is sick from cancer and another person who has gone through cancer and survives and makes a cure for it. For Suicide, maybe the person thinks that they are not good enough, they won't accomplish anything in life. Once that person is gone, the more awareness that people start to notice about Suicide and the more they make a change to stop it. Although they are gone, they did change something, later down for the generations to come. The reason why things in life are much more complicated is because it started with Adam and Eve, if they did not take the apple from the Garden of Eve, then none of this would happen. So, it's not your fault so don't blame yourself.

Answer 3

That’s deep 😮💨 I like it fr

Answer 4

This is really good, gj and keep it up!

Answer 5

Its rlly giving

Answer 6

That's hard

Answer 7

I like it

Answer 8

I like it awesome

Answer 9

I love it

Answer 10

This hits deeper when you actually know the pain in this poem.

Answer 11

it's a good but still hearfelt poem