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I want to give up
I want to stop thinking of you
Your name
Your face

Is running around in my head
It won't go away
Someone make it go away
End this please

Stop haunting me
It was not my fault
I told you not to
I cried and I begged

Yet you went along and
Still did it
Do I blame myself?
The answer is yes

I could have tried harder that night
But that night my tears took over
And it was hard to speak
Hard to get my words out

Even though I never wanted you gone
Just the thought of you dead made me cry
You will forever be in my head
I miss you Axle

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Rate my poem

I want to give up
I want to stop thinking of you
Your name 
Your face

Is running around in my head 
It won't go away
Someone make it go away
End this please

Stop haunting me 
It was not my fault
I told you not to
I cried and I begged

Yet you went along and 
Still did it 
Do I blame myself?
The answer is yes

I could have tried harder that night
But that night my tears took over
And it was hard to speak
Hard to get my words out

Even though I never wanted you gone 
Just the thought of you dead made me cry
You will forever be in my head 
I miss you Axle

TopNotchHero · Answer

the poem is really powerful. it captures deep emotions of loss and guilt beautifully. the repetition and raw honesty make it resonate. you've convey a lot in just a few lines but great job! and if i have to rate it i will give it a 8/10 ❤️

Midnight97 · Answer

The poem is great but instead of the answer is yes, you should just put yes.. besides that it is 8/10 I'll love to see you improve on this keep up the good work

gingy57016 · Answer

@topnotchhero wrote:

the poem is really powerful. it captures deep emotions of loss and guilt beautifully. the repetition and raw honesty make it resonate. you've convey a lot in just a few lines but great job! and if i have to rate it i will give it a 8/10 ❤️

Thanks

gingy57016 · Answer

@midnight97 wrote:

The poem is great but instead of the answer is yes, you should just put yes.. besides that it is 8/10 I'll love to see you improve on this keep up the good work

I will do better next time thank you for your feedback

TopNotchHero · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

@topnotchhero wrote:

the poem is really powerful. it captures deep emotions of loss and guilt beautifully. the repetition and raw honesty make it resonate. you've convey a lot in just a few lines but great job! and if i have to rate it i will give it a 8/10 ❤️

Thanks

You’re welcome! 😊

Midnight97 · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

@midnight97 wrote:

The poem is great but instead of the answer is yes, you should just put yes.. besides that it is 8/10 I'll love to see you improve on this keep up the good work

I will do better next time thank you for your feedback

You're welcome

SaltySuga · Answer

9.5/10 like it almost made me cry fr 😖

idontexistrn1 · Answer

10/10 u did good and this kinda reminds of someone myself

forgetmylife · Answer

don’t give up i know you’ve been through a lot i get it sometimes it gets to hard to handle but it’s about persevering and having others to help you. i like the poem as well. keep your head up

CherryLover · Answer

i really love your poem :D

Lizzyyy · Answer

1000000000000000000/10

euphoriiic · Answer

92

Parzival · Answer

i give it 8.5

Rileyy78 · Answer

@lizzyyy wrote:

1000000000000000000/10

fr

5StarFab · Answer

Are you being serious he’s not even dead 💀

Midnight97 · Answer

@5starfab wrote:

Are you being serious he’s not even dead 💀

Lol well it's a good poem

5StarFab · Answer

@midnight97 wrote:

@5starfab wrote:

Are you being serious he’s not even dead 💀

Lol well it's a good poem

Agree to disagree

Midnight97 · Answer

@5starfab wrote:

@midnight97 wrote:

@5starfab wrote:

Are you being serious he’s not even dead 💀

Lol well it's a good poem

Agree to disagree

Lol

gingy57016 · Answer

@5starfab wrote:

Are you being serious he’s not even dead 💀

My best friend Axle hung herself...

5StarFab · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

@5starfab wrote:

Are you being serious he’s not even dead 💀

My best friend Axle hung herself...

You’re making a post about axle doing that now axie

5StarFab · Answer

Even people off discord say axel is axie

gingy57016 · Answer

@5starfab wrote:

Even people off discord say axel is axie

Not an Axle from here Axle was my best friend and she is dead now and that is something I have to cope with

5StarFab · Answer

A a majority of your poems has stuff about people  killing them selves

5StarFab · Answer

@5starfab wrote:

A a majority of your poems has stuff about people killing them selves

An’

5StarFab · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

@5starfab wrote:

Even people off discord say axel is axie

Not an Axle from here Axle was my best friend and she is dead now and that is something I have to cope with

And if it’s a she why you calling her a guy?

gingy57016 · Answer

@5starfab wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

@5starfab wrote:

Even people off discord say axel is axie

Not an Axle from here Axle was my best friend and she is dead now and that is something I have to cope with

And if it’s a she why you calling her a guy?

Where did I call her a guy bro-

5StarFab · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

@5starfab wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

@5starfab wrote:

Even people off discord say axel is axie

Not an Axle from here Axle was my best friend and she is dead now and that is something I have to cope with

And if it’s a she why you calling her a guy?

Where did I call her a guy bro-

I was reading a whole other post my phone screen is cracked and It glitches mb