Question

~poem~

Answer 1

please don't respond unless its feedback, i will delete this if it turns into spam <3

Answer 2

I met the devil in a cell
I told him I was ok but Im very unwell
The exit sign was glowing way too bright
I was going to kill myself that night
Please don’t kill me for what I asked
He gave me a knife and started to laugh
I'd cut myself too if I were in your shoes
Leave my heart alone it's already been used
I just wanted a big ol hug
And all I was craving was mind-numbing drugs

You won’t ever see it on my face
The type of people I'm around aren't easily replaced
I called up a buddy years ago and he has the same issues
So we both just sit here and take drugs that we misuse
It's a cold world we learned by the age of seven
And ever since then i knew was not made for heaven
Im alone I said to the devilish grin
All he said was he’d hurt me again
I want to go home this place is so cold
The guards abused me and the lighting was old

I'm not ok as he laughed with a smile
Kill yourself but the pain only lasts for a while
I know I'm lost but will not kill myself
He called me a Pickle I was just feeling unwell
The pain is temporary but I can’t be done
I abuse myself till I feel like I've won
I only write the words to get them out of my head
But then I sit for hours just reading them over and over again
You’re fine he smirked walking around in my church
I just kept writing, just like I rehearsed

My mom can’t have a dead son
My brothers can’t have a dead one
My friends are all lonely
I want someone to hold me
The girl I like gets scared of these things
I sit in the corner and cry while he's laughing at me
I'm all alone in this world of drugs
I wish I could pop some and sit in the grave that I dug
All I ever wanted was to feel like I'm not a burden
So I don’t talk about my problems and keep hurting and hurting

He laughed and laughed and played with his blade
I wrote and I wrote until my mind started to fade
You won’t know where my head is at till it's done
I'll be on the ground while you try to find the gun
It was the devil that killed me, not the other way around
He's in my head, he put me on the ground
I said I was ok but I'm flirty with death
She doesn’t give me flowers just a small little peck
I'm sorry, I did try my best

Answer 3

i likeee itt very much 👀 a lil schizo maybe but its true in some ways, its rlly good <3<3 the devil sounds scarrryryryyy

Answer 4

its supposed to sound like me arguing with me AND and the bad side of me has extra people on their side but the good side is still wining, idk its abstract but I understand it so thats important

Answer 5

its a good poem but if ur going thru something i hope u feel better

Answer 6

ook

Answer 7

I love it

Answer 8

It depends what's in your heart and mind

Answer 9

buetifull

Answer 10

niceeeeee

Answer 11

Omg This is so awesome And I feel this all the way that I almost broke down you are very talented keep it up ong!!

Answer 12

W poem fr

Answer 13

This is absolutely amazing. Keep up the great work!! 💞

Answer 14

Your poem is raw and full of emotion. The way you express pain and struggle feels so real, like you're letting everything out in a way that hits hard. It’s powerful, and the honesty makes it even more impactful. Its a W poem

Answer 15

Noice