Question

Talkin' tough, but they ain't seen the worst,
I’m the voice of the pain, in this lyrical curse.
Throwin' punches at my demons, I'ma stand tall,
But the truth is, sometimes I just wanna crawl.
Ain't no shame in struggle, just a part of the ride,
So I’ll keep pushin' through, with my heart as my guide.

(Chorus)
I'm alone, in this dark, gotta face it,
Battlin' my thoughts, I'm a lost spaceship.
Ain't no one to call when I'm feelin' low,
Livin' in the chaos, man, I'm takin' blows.

(Outro)
So here I stand, motherPotatoa, I'm alive,
In this game of sadness, I'ma always strive.
Alone, but not lonely, just learnin' my role,
A warrior in shadows, still fightin' for my soul.

Answer 1

accidently had a bad word so it put motherpotatoa so just dont mind that

Answer 2

ok........other than that.........I think itz good

Answer 3

Thanks bro

Answer 4

np gold medal

Answer 5

I made it a few years ago i just found the old google doc i made

Answer 6

thank you so much

Answer 7

^^

Answer 8

:)

Answer 9

this is good i love it

Answer 10

thanks

Answer 11

amazing :)

Answer 12

thank you :)

Answer 13

AWW I think it has alot of emotion, which is great because now we can actually see what the writer feels right? Well that's good because I like being able to see what the writer feels. I think this is beautiful, It kinda reminds me of how I feel you know. Well Good job, this is a great piece here so

Answer 14

Thank you so much that means alot, when i write music i write about how i feel in the moment and what makes me feel that way!