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ARAAG:

Talkin' tough, but they ain't seen the worst, I’m the voice of the pain, in this lyrical curse. Throwin' punches at my demons, I'ma stand tall, But the truth is, sometimes I just wanna crawl. Ain't no shame in struggle, just a part of the ride, So I’ll keep pushin' through, with my heart as my guide. (Chorus) I'm alone, in this dark, gotta face it, Battlin' my thoughts, I'm a lost spaceship. Ain't no one to call when I'm feelin' low, Livin' in the chaos, man, I'm takin' blows. (Outro) So here I stand, motherPotatoa, I'm alive, In this game of sadness, I'ma always strive. Alone, but not lonely, just learnin' my role, A warrior in shadows, still fightin' for my soul.

ARAAG:

accidently had a bad word so it put motherpotatoa so just dont mind that

MAGABACK:

ok........other than that.........I think itz good

ARAAG:

Thanks bro

MAGABACK:

np gold medal

ARAAG:

I made it a few years ago i just found the old google doc i made

ARAAG:

thank you so much

MAGABACK:

^^

ARAAG:

:)

marienne:

this is good i love it

ARAAG:

thanks

CherryLover:

amazing :)

ARAAG:

thank you :)

Alanaaaaaaa:

AWW I think it has alot of emotion, which is great because now we can actually see what the writer feels right? Well that's good because I like being able to see what the writer feels. I think this is beautiful, It kinda reminds me of how I feel you know. Well Good job, this is a great piece here so

ARAAG:

Thank you so much that means alot, when i write music i write about how i feel in the moment and what makes me feel that way!

TeenyTinyPerson:

aww this is so lovely, it's like you like to express how you feel, I wanna be able to write like that. Could you give me some tips on writing like that.

Exile:

Very well written! Great Job!! 🤍

whyjustwhy:

i love it so much, i would understand that some people would conitder this art but in writing form. so when posting more story u would want to put the subject as "writing" instead of "art"

ykbatman:

its really good

ykbatman:

but it shouldnt be in the art section..

ihy:

It's good, but why in art?

ARAAG:

just didint see it at the time sorry

Gdub08:

W

Gdub08:

10/10

Gdub08:

Nice job

Gdub08:

Keep on writing

YoursTruly1234:

nice flow!

YoursTruly1234:

It’s gentle as well

ARAAG:

thanks everyone

ARAAG:

sorry for putting it in art i didint notice at the time

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