Question

Talkin' tough, but they ain't seen the worst,
I’m the voice of the pain, in this lyrical curse.
Throwin' punches at my demons, I'ma stand tall,
But the truth is, sometimes I just wanna crawl.
Ain't no shame in struggle, just a part of the ride,
So I’ll keep pushin' through, with my heart as my guide.

(Chorus)
I'm alone, in this dark, gotta face it,
Battlin' my thoughts, I'm a lost spaceship.
Ain't no one to call when I'm feelin' low,
Livin' in the chaos, man, I'm takin' blows.

(Outro)
So here I stand, motherPotatoa, I'm alive,
In this game of sadness, I'ma always strive.
Alone, but not lonely, just learnin' my role,
A warrior in shadows, still fightin' for my soul.

Answer 1

accidently had a bad word so it put motherpotatoa so just dont mind that

Answer 2

ok........other than that.........I think itz good

Answer 3

Thanks bro

Answer 4

np gold medal

Answer 5

I made it a few years ago i just found the old google doc i made

Answer 6

thank you so much

Answer 7

^^

Answer 8

:)

Answer 9

this is good i love it

Answer 10

thanks

Answer 11

amazing :)

Answer 12

thank you :)

Answer 13

AWW I think it has alot of emotion, which is great because now we can actually see what the writer feels right? Well that's good because I like being able to see what the writer feels. I think this is beautiful, It kinda reminds me of how I feel you know. Well Good job, this is a great piece here so

Answer 14

Thank you so much that means alot, when i write music i write about how i feel in the moment and what makes me feel that way!

Answer 15

aww this is so lovely, it's like you like to express how you feel, I wanna be able to write like that. Could you give me some tips on writing like that.

Answer 16

Very well written! Great Job!! 🤍

Answer 17

i love it so much, i would understand that some people would conitder this art but in writing form. so when posting more story u would want to put the subject as "writing" instead of "art"

Answer 18

its really good

Answer 19

but it shouldnt be in the art section..

Answer 20

It's good, but why in art?

Answer 21

just didint see it at the time sorry

Answer 22

W

Answer 23

10/10

Answer 24

Nice job

Answer 25

Keep on writing

Answer 26

nice flow!

Answer 27

It’s gentle as well

Answer 28

thanks everyone

Answer 29

sorry for putting it in art i didint notice at the time