Talkin' tough, but they ain't seen the worst, I’m the voice of the pain, in this lyrical curse. Throwin' punches at my demons, I'ma stand tall, But the truth is, sometimes I just wanna crawl. Ain't no shame in struggle, just a part of the ride, So I’ll keep pushin' through, with my heart as my guide. (Chorus) I'm alone, in this dark, gotta face it, Battlin' my thoughts, I'm a lost spaceship. Ain't no one to call when I'm feelin' low, Livin' in the chaos, man, I'm takin' blows. (Outro) So here I stand, motherPotatoa, I'm alive, In this game of sadness, I'ma always strive. Alone, but not lonely, just learnin' my role, A warrior in shadows, still fightin' for my soul.
accidently had a bad word so it put motherpotatoa so just dont mind that
ok........other than that.........I think itz good
Thanks bro
np gold medal
I made it a few years ago i just found the old google doc i made
thank you so much
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this is good i love it
thanks
amazing :)
thank you :)
AWW I think it has alot of emotion, which is great because now we can actually see what the writer feels right? Well that's good because I like being able to see what the writer feels. I think this is beautiful, It kinda reminds me of how I feel you know. Well Good job, this is a great piece here so
Thank you so much that means alot, when i write music i write about how i feel in the moment and what makes me feel that way!
aww this is so lovely, it's like you like to express how you feel, I wanna be able to write like that. Could you give me some tips on writing like that.
Very well written! Great Job!! 🤍
i love it so much, i would understand that some people would conitder this art but in writing form. so when posting more story u would want to put the subject as "writing" instead of "art"
its really good
but it shouldnt be in the art section..
It's good, but why in art?
just didint see it at the time sorry
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10/10
Nice job
Keep on writing
nice flow!
It’s gentle as well
thanks everyone
sorry for putting it in art i didint notice at the time
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