Cool and broken
Life is great
when you are broken there is no light
The light that used to be there
The light that is now gone
From this day on
Love will be gone
Till the day I bleed
Is the day I cry
(not a break up poem just something I made)

Question

Cool and broken 
Life is great 
when you are broken there is no light
The light that used to be there 
The light that is now gone 
From this day on
Love will be gone 
Till the day I bleed 
Is the day I cry 
(not a break up poem just something I made)

Autumnx · Answer

Oooo nice

TinyGhost · Answer

@autumnx wrote:

Oooo nice

Thank you

Autumnx · Answer

@tinyghost wrote:

@autumnx wrote:

Oooo nice

Thank you

No problem

Breathless · Answer

this has a kick to it I don't know why

2hrs · Answer

Beautiful

MAGABACK · Answer

hmm kindahow my brother feels

NeverEverDone · Answer

keep expressing yourself like this it is really good ^^

TinyGhost · Answer

@nevereverdone wrote:

keep expressing yourself like this it is really good ^^

Thank ypu

TinyGhost · Answer

You**

NeverEverDone · Answer

@tinyghost wrote:

@nevereverdone wrote:

keep expressing yourself like this it is really good ^^

Thank ypu

yw 😢

sllo · Answer

WWW

Alanaaaaaaa · Answer

ooo mamas good job

TinyGhost · Answer

@alanaaaaaaa wrote:

ooo mamas good job

Thank you

forgetmylife · Answer

Well written nice job

NeverEverDone · Answer

it was the best written ever

TinyGhost · Answer

@forgetmylife wrote:

Well written nice job

@nevereverdone wrote:

it was the best written ever

Thank you both

Alanaaaaaaa · Answer

oo it's nice

Midnight97 · Answer

@alanaaaaaaa wrote:

oo it's nice

Lol

AcornTheNut · Answer

are you gonna make a part 2?

QuietLuxe · Answer

Your poem captures deep pain and loss, even without a breakup. The imagery of lost light and bleeding emotions is powerful. It’s a raw, honest expression, and writing like this can help process those feelings. Keep channeling that energy.