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whypyt:

I lie awake tonight, Wishing of things I can change. I try to convince myself, But it's all so strange. Is it me, Or is it you? Do I try, Or are we through? So long we've shared Just to walk away. But so much hurt To want to stay. Why do we do this, Try to hurt the other more, Only to watch one Walk right out the door? I love you so much, Yet I push you to the point of breaking, But why do you play with my heart And never stop taking? Is this the end Or a new beginning? Only one can guide me When my head is spinning. Don't push, Don't try, Don't stress, Don't cry. That is what plays Over in my head As I try to close my eyes And just go to bed

shesjujuu:

ts

NeverEverDone:

the back and forth feelings of love and hurt like that is tough to be stuck in that cycle of wanting to stay but feeling so much pain but is like you want to hold on but also needing to protect yourself. but honestly i think you need to move on like your just overthinking things like relationships is messy of course but if this is hard just move on already like seriously you can't be playing these games whoever you with because they break your heart your damn heart and i been through it too many times like love is a waste of time period... but i like this poem overall so i give it a 8/10 :)

whypyt:

@nevereverdone wrote:
the back and forth feelings of love and hurt like that is tough to be stuck in that cycle of wanting to stay but feeling so much pain but is like you want to hold on but also needing to protect yourself. but honestly i think you need to move on like your just overthinking things like relationships is messy of course but if this is hard just move on already like seriously you can't be playing these games whoever you with because they break your heart your damn heart and i been through it too many times like love is a waste of time period... but i like this poem overall so i give it a 8/10 :)
thank you soo much u taught me the morals of it all and i will

NeverEverDone:

@whypyt wrote:
@nevereverdone wrote:
the back and forth feelings of love and hurt like that is tough to be stuck in that cycle of wanting to stay but feeling so much pain but is like you want to hold on but also needing to protect yourself. but honestly i think you need to move on like your just overthinking things like relationships is messy of course but if this is hard just move on already like seriously you can't be playing these games whoever you with because they break your heart your damn heart and i been through it too many times like love is a waste of time period... but i like this poem overall so i give it a 8/10 :)
thank you soo much u taught me the morals of it all and i will
no problem! i am glad but writings these feelings can really help you like i think it is a great way to sort everything out so yeah keep on writing!!! :)

whypyt:

thx

NeverEverDone:

@whypyt wrote:
thx
yw ^^

marienne:

nice

marienne:

good one

marienne:

@nevereverdone wrote:
the back and forth feelings of love and hurt like that is tough to be stuck in that cycle of wanting to stay but feeling so much pain but is like you want to hold on but also needing to protect yourself. but honestly i think you need to move on like your just overthinking things like relationships is messy of course but if this is hard just move on already like seriously you can't be playing these games whoever you with because they break your heart your damn heart and i been through it too many times like love is a waste of time period... but i like this poem overall so i give it a 8/10 :)
this is good

barnbuns:

I give it a 8.5/1

barnbuns:

10*

TinydinoUwU:

9/10

Graysonunderwoods:

THIS SUCKS,jkjk its resonable and make 0 sense :) jk

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