I want to run, I want to hide
From all the pain he caused inside.
I want to scream, I want to cry.
Why can't I tell him goodbye?

I want to move on; I just can't let go.
I love him more than he will ever know.
I want to start over, I want to feel free!
But this pain will never leave me be.

He hurt me bad; the pain is deep
From all the promises he couldn't keep.
All the lies I heard him say
Are in my head and just won't fade.

How can I forget him, leave him behind?
Erase the memories from my mind?
He doesn't love me, and he never will.
He will never care how I feel.

Question

I want to run, I want to hide
From all the pain he caused inside.
I want to scream, I want to cry.
Why can't I tell him goodbye?

I want to move on; I just can't let go.
I love him more than he will ever know.
I want to start over, I want to feel free!
But this pain will never leave me be.

He hurt me bad; the pain is deep
From all the promises he couldn't keep.
All the lies I heard him say
Are in my head and just won't fade.

How can I forget him, leave him behind?
Erase the memories from my mind?
He doesn't love me, and he never will.
He will never care how I feel.

kristen000021 · Answer

this is good. I like it. its deep. gj

Nilae · Answer

it's very deep, i love it. reminds me of my ex fr

forgetmylife · Answer

The amount of pain these words have I can feel. He will know your worth sooner or later. He will know that he lost something good in his life and he will ponder upon that. A lovely poem Yana good job I’m always here if you want to talk or vent💞

whypyt · Answer

@forgetmylife wrote:

The amount of pain these words have I can feel. He will know your worth sooner or later. He will know that he lost something good in his life and he will ponder upon that. A lovely poem Yana good job I’m always here if you want to talk or vent💞

thank you very much nas

forgetmylife · Answer

@whypyt wrote:

@forgetmylife wrote:

The amount of pain these words have I can feel. He will know your worth sooner or later. He will know that he lost something good in his life and he will ponder upon that. A lovely poem Yana good job I’m always here if you want to talk or vent💞

thank you very much nas

Of course 💞

AlreadyWinning · Answer

the "he" here is the good guy

CrownOfSilver · Answer

this poem is so real, so raw. you can really feel the weight of the pain in your words, and i think a lot of people can relate to that internal conflict like wanting to move on but feeling so stuck in the hurt. it's that feeling of being trapped between wanting to let go and still holding on to someone, even when you know deep down they don't treat you right. The way you talk about wanting to run, wanting to hide from the pain, but not being able to let go that struggle is relatable. Love can be complicated like that, especially when it's mixed with lies and broken promises. it's like the scars of those unkept promises just won't fade. and they keep replaying in your mind. And that line, "He doesn't love me, and he never/ He will never care how i feel" that is a big gut punch. it's like you've finally face the truth, even if it hurts, but it's also the hardest part of moving on realizing you're the only one who truly cares. it's okay to feel everything you're feeling right now. it's part of the process, even if it feels endless. But you will find a way to move forward. The memories may stay, but they won't control you forever. This kind of pain doesn't define you. even though it feels all consuming right now. You're not alone in this. Take it one step at a time, and when you're ready, you'll find your way to feel free again.💛  and i like this poem so i give it a 7.5/10 like i feel the Emotional Depth,Relatability and Direct and Honest. 💔🌍🫶

AlreadyWinning · Answer

@crownofsilver wrote:

this poem is so real, so raw. you can really feel the weight of the pain in your words, and i think a lot of people can relate to that internal conflict like wanting to move on but feeling so stuck in the hurt. it's that feeling of being trapped between wanting to let go and still holding on to someone, even when you know deep down they don't treat you right. The way you talk about wanting to run, wanting to hide from the pain, but not being able to let go that struggle is relatable. Love can be complicated like that, especially when it's mixed with lies and broken promises. it's like the scars of those unkept promises just won't fade. and they keep replaying in your mind. And that line, "He doesn't love me, and he never/ He will never care how i feel" that is a big gut punch. it's like you've finally face the truth, even if it hurts, but it's also the hardest part of moving on realizing you're the only one who truly cares. it's okay to feel everything you're feeling right now. it's part of the process, even if it feels endless. But you will find a way to move forward. The memories may stay, but they won't control you forever. This kind of pain doesn't define you. even though it feels all consuming right now. You're not alone in this. Take it one step at a time, and when you're ready, you'll find your way to feel free again.💛 and i like this poem so i give it a 7.5/10 like i feel the Emotional Depth,Relatability and Direct and Honest. 💔🌍🫶

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CrownOfSilver · Answer

@alreadywinning wrote:

@crownofsilver wrote:

this poem is so real, so raw. you can really feel the weight of the pain in your words, and i think a lot of people can relate to that internal conflict like wanting to move on but feeling so stuck in the hurt. it's that feeling of being trapped between wanting to let go and still holding on to someone, even when you know deep down they don't treat you right. The way you talk about wanting to run, wanting to hide from the pain, but not being able to let go that struggle is relatable. Love can be complicated like that, especially when it's mixed with lies and broken promises. it's like the scars of those unkept promises just won't fade. and they keep replaying in your mind. And that line, "He doesn't love me, and he never/ He will never care how i feel" that is a big gut punch. it's like you've finally face the truth, even if it hurts, but it's also the hardest part of moving on realizing you're the only one who truly cares. it's okay to feel everything you're feeling right now. it's part of the process, even if it feels endless. But you will find a way to move forward. The memories may stay, but they won't control you forever. This kind of pain doesn't define you. even though it feels all consuming right now. You're not alone in this. Take it one step at a time, and when you're ready, you'll find your way to feel free again.💛 and i like this poem so i give it a 7.5/10 like i feel the Emotional Depth,Relatability and Direct and Honest. 💔🌍🫶

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nope

AlreadyWinning · Answer

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CrownOfSilver · Answer

@alreadywinning wrote:

this is you rn:

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AlreadyWinning · Answer

@crownofsilver wrote:

@alreadywinning wrote:

this is you rn:

isn't everyone lmao

you wish

CrownOfSilver · Answer

@alreadywinning wrote:

@crownofsilver wrote:

@alreadywinning wrote:

this is you rn:

isn't everyone lmao

you wish

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sllo · Answer

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DaRealBatman · Answer

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Serpents · Answer

Real.

ihy · Answer

Good stuff. That's real.

luhsky25 · Answer

whypyt this is fire good job

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