Question

A Feeling, like I am about to drown.
Your heavy weight, it ties me down,
A shiny smile, that hides my frown,
A scratch, out on, my shiny crown.

Your Days like night, so dark and black,
A youth, the time, I can't get back.
A warmth, the light, I seem to lack,
Of old joy, I lost the track.

A mask of bricks, I use to hide,
Dare, just no one, gets inside,
To where old me, the kid had died.
Where not a tear, was left uncried.

This, where all the voices roam,
For I am never, left alone.
The yells of doubt, always atone,
In this void, I call my own.

And this void is dark and deep,
And here I go, before I sleep.
I sink in, no grip to keep,
At night, trough the dark I creep.

You wrap around, you lying snake,
Around my head, while I am wake,
Telling me thoughts, I'll never shake,
This bane is something, I can't break.


Cause in this world, of black and gray,
Where colours, joy both flown away.
This seems to be, the way I stay,
This tortue, till the end of day.

Answer 1

DANG LOVE IT!!!!

Answer 2

GOOD JOB

Answer 3

goodjob...👍

Answer 4

danggg

Answer 5

Thank you all.

Answer 6

wow it is the heaviness of feeling stuck in that darkness, struggling with doubts and emotions that feel impossible to shake. it's like you're drowning your own mind, hiding behind a smile while everything feels suffocating. like i am sorry you feel this way. :(

Answer 7

if ur about 2 drown than get out of the water

Answer 8

WWWWWWWW

Answer 9

Get your Apple out of the water!!!