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HoldingAbsence:

A Feeling, like I am about to drown. Your heavy weight, it ties me down, A shiny smile, that hides my frown, A scratch, out on, my shiny crown. Your Days like night, so dark and black, A youth, the time, I can't get back. A warmth, the light, I seem to lack, Of old joy, I lost the track. A mask of bricks, I use to hide, Dare, just no one, gets inside, To where old me, the kid had died. Where not a tear, was left uncried. This, where all the voices roam, For I am never, left alone. The yells of doubt, always atone, In this void, I call my own. And this void is dark and deep, And here I go, before I sleep. I sink in, no grip to keep, At night, trough the dark I creep. You wrap around, you lying snake, Around my head, while I am wake, Telling me thoughts, I'll never shake, This bane is something, I can't break. Cause in this world, of black and gray, Where colours, joy both flown away. This seems to be, the way I stay, This tortue, till the end of day.

h1mULT:

DANG LOVE IT!!!!

h1mULT:

GOOD JOB

kristen000021:

goodjob...👍

kehlani1253:

danggg

HoldingAbsence:

Thank you all.

QuietLuxe:

wow it is the heaviness of feeling stuck in that darkness, struggling with doubts and emotions that feel impossible to shake. it's like you're drowning your own mind, hiding behind a smile while everything feels suffocating. like i am sorry you feel this way. :(

GoatyGoat:

if ur about 2 drown than get out of the water

Nininiko:

WWWWWWWW

Harmonic:

Get your Apple out of the water!!!

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