Heres another poem i made a few months ago when i was at my lowest so here's my poem should I give up

Should I not give up or give in to my thoughts
I know that if I could see my younger self
I would hug them and tell them that
Everything will be ok keep going
But right now I want to give up
And No you don't know how it was
For a little 4-year-old to learn to fake a smile
pretending everything was fine when deep
Behind that smile was a scared little kid
They just wanted to feel safe and loved
I just don't know what to do anymore
I want to be happy again is that too much to ask

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Heres another poem i made a few months ago when i was at my lowest so here's my poem should I give up

Should I not give up or give in to my thoughts 
I know that if I could see my younger self 
I would hug them and tell them that
Everything will be ok keep going 
But right now I want to give up
And No you don't know how it was
For a little 4-year-old to learn to fake a smile 
pretending everything was fine when deep 
Behind that smile was a scared little kid 
They just wanted to feel safe and loved 
I  just don't know what to do anymore 
I want to be happy again is that too much to ask

kristen000021 · Answer

dude...i feel this.. very good deep words

Raye14 · Answer

@kristen000021 wrote:

dude...i feel this.. very good deep words

ty i was at my lowest when i wrote this and on here i can finally feel heard

kristen000021 · Answer

@raye14 wrote:

@kristen000021 wrote:

dude...i feel this.. very good deep words

ty i was at my lowest when i wrote this and on here i can finally feel heard

well if you need someone to talk to I'm here :)

Raye14 · Answer

@kristen000021 wrote:

@raye14 wrote:

@kristen000021 wrote:

dude...i feel this.. very good deep words

ty i was at my lowest when i wrote this and on here i can finally feel heard

well if you need someone to talk to I'm here :)

ty and same to you

mwahnogirl · Answer

i really do like your writing!! i dont read poems much but i really should. and also this is very relatable, i def wish i could comfort little me :)

Raye14 · Answer

@mwahnogirl wrote:

i really do like your writing!! i dont read poems much but i really should. and also this is very relatable, i def wish i could comfort little me :)

tysm<3

mwahnogirl · Answer

@raye14 wrote:

@mwahnogirl wrote:

i really do like your writing!! i dont read poems much but i really should. and also this is very relatable, i def wish i could comfort little me :)

tysm<3

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Ray12 · Answer

niceeeeee

Raye14 · Answer

@ray12 wrote:

niceeeeee

ty

Ray12 · Answer

no prob