Question

This is the OG version of a story
Credits to Nat: I will never forget what happened to me and my friend that night. Me and my friend were out at night walking in the neighborhood we couldn’t sleep so that’s why we decided to walk. We were near the abandoned house and my friend said, “ We should go in it’s a cool abandoned house! “ “ No are you crazy?! Well on second thought I think we should we got nothing to do so why not”. When we entered the house there was a big staircase we separated and later we could meet up later. I started exploring some more but then I heard a loud bang it sounded like it cam from a basement so I rushed down. I saw a figure and I thought it was her so I went but before I could get any closer to the figure it disappeared into thin air. I tried calling my friend’s name I tried searching around the house but she was gone. I went to the police station and I told them what happened but they didn’t believe me so I had no choice but to go bach home, I still have nightmares about that I wonder what would happen if we didn’t separate I wonder if it’s my fault I could have done something but there was nothing I could have done.

Answer 1

My version: How could I forget that night……It was a nightmare. I had made her go into that house, it was all my fault ... .How could you blame a bored mind and some stupid teenagers? We were having a sleepover at my friend’s house and we couldn’t sleep, so we decided to take a walk around the neighborhood. As we were taking a walk we came across a “ haunted “ house, and I wasn’t into believing all that paranormal stuff. I tried convincing my friend to go inside and I wished I didn’t. At first, her response was “ No, are you crazy?! “ I stared at her bored and her second response was “ Well on second thought, I think we should, we got nothing to do so why not”. As we went inside the house, we stopped in front of a big staircase, I told her “ I’ll take this floor and the basement, you take the second floor “. She agreed and once she disappeared out of view I decided to take a look at the basement…..I saw someone, and I laughed nervously “ Nice try, Nat you’re not scaring me” but I heard no response, I started to get closer but something got thrown across the floor loudly and I flinched, the black shadow or the “ person “ disappeared. I started to panic and run towards the stairs but I stumbled across something, things started to fall, some missing me by a bit after that….everything went blank….I can’t remember anything else just my friend screaming my name out, I watched her weakly as she panicked and scared leaving me here alone in this dark house……….I don’t know how she’s doing right now, or what happened but I stayed here and wandered around the dark…….


Me and her live in different worlds now, you
could say

Answer 2

Wow so cool

Answer 3

amazing

Answer 4

10/10