Not a breakup poem but something from the heart
Lmk how it is and what to fix thanks :

I tried to make us last
After all the hurt we had
But that doesn't matter now
Cause you let that all down
You broke us
You made me feel that we wouldn't last
Guess that feeling was right
Cause all I tried was to make it last
Because all I ever wanted was us
Was us to be something we're not anymore

Question

Not a breakup poem but something from the heart
Lmk how it is and what to fix thanks :>

I tried to make us last
After all the hurt we had
But that doesn't matter now
Cause you let that all down
You broke us
You made me feel that we wouldn't last
Guess that feeling was right
Cause all I tried was to make it last
Because all I ever wanted was us 
Was us to be something we're not anymore

LadyBella · Answer

its nice

Midnight97 · Answer

@ladybella wrote:

its nice

Thank you

LadyBella · Answer

@midnight97 wrote:

@ladybella wrote:

its nice

Thank you

yw

kristen000021 · Answer

Very nice

Midnight97 · Answer

@kristen000021 wrote:

Very nice

Thank you

SaltySuga · Answer

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Gdub08 · Answer

Don't fix anything. Leave it the way it is. This is great.

Midnight97 · Answer

@gdub08 wrote:

Don't fix anything. Leave it the way it is. This is great.

Thank you

Gdub08 · Answer

@midnight97 wrote:

@gdub08 wrote:

Don't fix anything. Leave it the way it is. This is great.

Thank you

np

ihy · Answer

Good Job Midnight!

Midnight97 · Answer

@ihy wrote:

Good Job Midnight!

Thank you

ihy · Answer

@midnight97 wrote:

@ihy wrote:

Good Job Midnight!

Thank you

No problem man!

TheFixer · Answer

@midnight97 wrote:

@ihy wrote:

Good Job Midnight!

Thank you

its good! :D

Midnight97 · Answer

@thefixer wrote:

@midnight97 wrote:

@ihy wrote:

Good Job Midnight!

Thank you

its good! :D

Thank you

TheyDontKnow · Answer

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TheyDontKnow · Answer

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Bounty · Answer

mmm good job bookie

cherryblossom999 · Answer

this is a really good poem!! keep it up =33

Midnight97 · Answer

Thank you guys

forgetmylife · Answer

I understood every little detail. All the hidden emotion within this. I love this poem, keep it up.

Midnight97 · Answer

@forgetmylife wrote:

I understood every little detail. All the hidden emotion within this. I love this poem, keep it up.

Thank you!!

forgetmylife · Answer

@midnight97 wrote:

@forgetmylife wrote:

I understood every little detail. All the hidden emotion within this. I love this poem, keep it up.

Thank you!!

Of course <3

GodModeX · Answer

this is a really good poem <333

Midnight97 · Answer

@godmodex wrote:

this is a really good poem <333

Thank you hun (I call people hun dw lol)

SunFlower01 · Answer

last line could be changed a little

MAGABACK · Answer

I love this <3 keep it up

Midnight97 · Answer

@sunflower01 wrote:

last line could be changed a little

Alright thank you

Midnight97 · Answer

@magaback wrote:

I love this <3 keep it up

Thanks

Jasdasimp · Answer

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willams · Answer

hi

Midnight97 · Answer

@willams wrote:

hi

Hi?

gdubb08 · Answer

this is good

XShawtyX · Answer

This is rlly good 💯

TheFixer · Answer

@midnight97 wrote:

@willams wrote:

hi

Hi?

hey if you havent seen i made a post about a book i made and i was wondering if you would be intrested in joining me in finishing and makeing it. ( ik this is random but i read your post yesterday i think ) but ya.

TheFixer · Answer

you seem to have some skill in story / wrighting

TheFixer · Answer

typo.

gdubb08 · Answer

noice

sllo · Answer

Skibbidi toilet

TamaKing · Answer

cool cool

Timmyspu · Answer

Please dont turn Midnights post into spam. Make sure to keep on topic with what the post is about.

Midnight97 · Answer

Thank you everyone but I am gonna be closing this before it becomes spam

Midnight97 · Answer

@thefixer wrote:

@midnight97 wrote:

@willams wrote:

hi

Hi?

hey if you havent seen i made a post about a book i made and i was wondering if you would be intrested in joining me in finishing and makeing it. ( ik this is random but i read your post yesterday i think ) but ya.

Hey sure I would love to help out

TJH · Answer

nice job

Midnight97 · Answer

@tjh wrote:

nice job

Thank you