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This will be the last time,

That I think about you

All the things that we’ve gone through

Now I go through it all alone

This will be the last time I express my thoughts

It’s not like you’ll ever listen to them anyway

Voice calls out but you don’t answer back

All the love I had is gone
The person I was
The moments we had
Like it never happened
Just a memory
Now you’ve moved on and I’m stuck with these feelings

Hate that you moved on
Thought that would help me move past you

Hate that he has you

These crazy thoughts that you left behind

Raising these red flags

Driving me down

You can’t see that you moving on has left
me broken down

Guess you can’t see my heart bleeding

through those rose colored glasses

I hate that I miss you

I hate that you’re gone and I’m lost

I hate those sunflowers you left on my door

I hate the twisted love you left behind

I hate that I caused it and you moved on

I hate that you’re ok and I can’t move on

I hate sitting on the floor thinking all night long

I hate all these tears that I cry cause you’re
gone

I hate in the end that it was me who was wrong

My minds gone corrupted ruining all that I want

I hate that I don’t really hate you at all
I’ve tried it all to forget you and move on

Pretended you were dead and I should go on

A ghost or a memory I guess I haven’t decided

Pretended all we did was just in my head

and it never happened at all

Stuck in a pitiful place

Stuck with self doubt

Stuck with these feelings that bring me down

Raising red flags I think I need help

But help only comes in the shape of your your love

Guess it’s over and I’m gonna die all alone

Waiting for the one day that you’ll come and tell me that it’s all gonna be ok

forgive me for what I’ve done

Forgive all the things I’ve said and that I can move on

Tell me that it’s ok for me to move on

But without you I can’t move on

Wondering where you are

Waiting to be saved

Until my last breath my heart will always be yours

Answer 1

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Answer 2

this is gorgeous, I'd love to read more (I love heartbreak/sad poem SMSMSM)

Answer 3

Here is a response a wrote to my poem up above.


If it shall be the last time you think of me, hold your thought,
For I wanna relive again, our time that felt like heaven

All the things we've gone through, I would want to go through again,
I will never let you go through it alone

The last time you express your thoughts, you say,
why don't we never express them and forever we stay

I will alway listen to you, and your thoughts,
because for me, nothing is more important than giving you my attention,
no matter if we go through cold's or hot's,
for you, my dear, I will always have full comprehension

You say, I never answer?
I will always answer to you, maybe not always by words
but always by love
my love for you, is bigger than anyone's could could ever be

All the love you had is gone, you say,
but let me show you my love for you, if i may,
the person you are and the person you were,
both which I love more than I could anything else.

The moments we had, I will never forget,
for the moments with you are more worth than anything,
the moments with you aren't just a memory,
it's a burnt-in crest in my heart of our history.

You say, you hate I moved on,
then join me along.
the only thing I hate, is you being alone

Let me lead you away from the wrong and into the paradise of love,
a way, with no sweat, tears and no rough

Don't be mad about what happened before,
let me show you how much love you deserve, here and now

If I hurt you in any way, may god punish me 100 times harder,
I hate to hurt you, I wouldn't even think to do so in 1001 nights.
For you my love, I would take on any pain there is to take,
just to be sure, our bond still is wake

"I hate, I hate, I hate..." let's start on a new beginning
If the world is full of hate, I would build you another planet
just to be assured, that you and I can be happy and loved

You, my dear are never wrong,
the only one who was, was me all along
hurting someone like you?
I must be pretty dumb

Answer 4

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Answer 5

Rs

Answer 6

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Answer 7

you are so smart and this is an amazing poem and you should keep writing. good job. you are also so pretty

Answer 8

nice poem

Answer 9

Great Job!

Answer 10

10/10

Answer 11

good job

Answer 12

Keep going

Answer 13

keep up the good work