Across the miles, I feel the ache,
A pull within, a longing wake.
I see the stars that light your night,
And wonder if you feel my fight.

My heart is bound to distant shores,
In whispers soft, in silent roars.
I wait in shadows, lost in dreams,
Where you and I are more than it seems.

The clock ticks slow, the hours blend,
As I wait for you to break and bend—
To speak the words, to bridge the space,
And ask me, finally, to take my place.

You, the one whose name I trace,
A secret whispered in time and grace.
I know you feel it, too, don't hide,
The distance fades when hearts collide.

Just say the words, and let me fall,
For you alone could end it all.
The longing and the quiet fight,
The waiting turns to sweet delight.

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Across the miles, I feel the ache,
A pull within, a longing wake.
I see the stars that light your night,
And wonder if you feel my fight.

My heart is bound to distant shores,
In whispers soft, in silent roars.
I wait in shadows, lost in dreams,
Where you and I are more than it seems.

The clock ticks slow, the hours blend,
As I wait for you to break and bend—
To speak the words, to bridge the space,
And ask me, finally, to take my place.

You, the one whose name I trace,
A secret whispered in time and grace.
I know you feel it, too, don't hide,
The distance fades when hearts collide.

Just say the words, and let me fall,
For you alone could end it all.
The longing and the quiet fight,
The waiting turns to sweet delight.

Laylalyssa · Answer

its lovely

addison123456 · Answer

@laylalyssa wrote:

its lovely

thank you I appreciate it.

DonaldTrumpofQC · Answer

I love it. Keep on  writing, Addy<3

addison123456 · Answer

@donaldtrumpofqc wrote:

I love it. Keep on writing, Addy<3

thank you Gabe always. I'll forever write.

theydontknowally · Answer

GIRLLL this is amazing !! like it speaks to you or something. I fr love it smm

addison123456 · Answer

@theydontknowally wrote:

GIRLLL this is amazing !! like it speaks to you or something. I fr love it smm

yeahs', its about jus wanting them to tell you how they feel

Sleep · Answer

I like how delicate the wording is

addison123456 · Answer

@sleep wrote:

I like how delicate the wording is

thank you. its dedicated to someone who will soon know I love em

kristen000021 · Answer

Good job

euphoriiic · Answer

coolio

BlkOps77 · Answer

Nice

fwval · Answer

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SaltySuga · Answer

Www

BoldBrandon · Answer

It’s like a Hallmark card threw up its feelings all over this poem like straight up trash

ufo · Answer

It's awesome. Great Job

addison123456 · Answer

@boldbrandon wrote:

It’s like a Hallmark card threw up its feelings all over this poem like straight up trash

shut up

addison123456 · Answer

@ufo wrote:

It's awesome. Great Job

thank you

GoatyGoat · Answer

This is awesome keep it up