-Unfazed-
In a world of whispers, I stand tall,
Dodging the echoes, I refuse to fall.
With every glance that tries to pry,
I simply smile, and let it fly.

Let judgments rain like autumn leaves,
I’m rooted deep; I’m who I please.
The weight of opinions? Not my load,
I’ll pack my joy, and hit the road.
- Me

Question

-Unfazed-
In a world of whispers, I stand tall,
Dodging the echoes, I refuse to fall.
With every glance that tries to pry,
I simply smile, and let it fly.

Let judgments rain like autumn leaves,
I’m rooted deep; I’m who I please.
The weight of opinions? Not my load,
I’ll pack my joy, and hit the road.
- Me

Isry · Answer

“Judgement falls like autumn leaves.” What does this line mean to you? Why did you write it? I think the rhymes “tall” and “fall” “fly” and “pry” and “load” and “road” are pretty cliched and an easy way to quickly write something. How long did this poem take you to write?

theydontknowally · Answer

You always do good on your poems you post, I like all of them. Good job 💯

Chronic · Answer

The statement "Judgement Falls like autumn leaves" Translates to the leaves being everyone's opinions about me and how it just comes out of everybody mouth. It took me a solid 15 to 20 min to do this poem, Its not really my Greatest one but I have tried. Thank You!

Chronic · Answer

@theydontknowally wrote:

You always do good on your poems you post, I like all of them. Good job 💯

Much thanks! Much Love!

Chronic · Answer

@isry wrote:

“Judgement falls like autumn leaves.” What does this line mean to you? Why did you write it? I think the rhymes “tall” and “fall” “fly” and “pry” and “load” and “road” are pretty cliched and an easy way to quickly write something. How long did this poem take you to write?

@chronic wrote:

The statement "Judgement Falls like autumn leaves" Translates to the leaves being everyone's opinions about me and how it just comes out of everybody mouth. It took me a solid 15 to 20 min to do this poem, Its not really my Greatest one but I have tried. Thank You!

Isry · Answer

@chronic wrote:

The statement "Judgement Falls like autumn leaves" Translates to the leaves being everyone's opinions about me and how it just comes out of everybody mouth. It took me a solid 15 to 20 min to do this poem, Its not really my Greatest one but I have tried. Thank You!

15-20 minutes gotcha. I’d recommend spending at least a day on your poetry before you publish it. Almost no poets work on something for 15-20 minutes. You have to ask yourself what you’re trying to say. It is so important to spend time as you’re writing. To write and rewrite. Asking questions like “has this been said before?” “How can I make this unique to myself and what I want to say as a writer.” I write scripts of various lengths and for various purposes. Even for a 3 or 4 page script in an informal setting I spend at least an hour writing. It goes through several iterations before I give it to my actors. Poems are no different. Poetry is such a beautiful art form, but you should treat it with respect. Have respect for your work and yourself enough to really think about your work.

Chronic · Answer

@isry wrote:

@chronic wrote:

Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the writing process! I completely agree that taking time to reflect on our work is essential, especially in poetry. The questions you mentioned about originality and personal voice are certainly important. I find that sometimes, inspiration strikes quickly, and I jot down ideas in a short burst of creativity. However, I definitely go through a thorough revision process afterward to refine my thoughts and ensure they resonate. It's a balance, between capturing that initial spark and allowing the poem to evolve into something more polished. Though I really appreciate the reminder and Tips

Isry · Answer

If you’d ever like you can always DM me your drafts and I could give constructive feedback before you publish. I love writing and I love helping people improve in this valuable skill.

Chronic · Answer

@isry wrote:

If you’d ever like you can always DM me your drafts and I could give constructive feedback before you publish. I love writing and I love helping people improve in this valuable skill.

Thank you so much for the offer! I really appreciate your willingness to help and share your insights. I might take you up on that in the future as I work on my drafts!

2hrs · Answer

wow sos sigma

NaiNoah · Answer

Very deep

fnu · Answer

pain  i like this