Question

-Little Me-
Hey Little Me, Forgive me for it all
Im sorry I couldn’t fight back, im sorry I wasn’t strong
Im sorry I didnt tell no one about what they have done
I Kept it all inside, feeling lost, feeling wrong.

I painted on a smile, a fragile, fleeting mask,
But beneath the surface, the weight was much too vast.
I wanted to be brave, to scream and to be heard,
But the fear of all their judgment kept me locked without a word.

Little Me, I see the scars n tears you try to hide,
The nights you felt like nothing, the dreams you cast aside.
You wanted strong arms holding you, to say it’s not your fault
But all the people did was ignore and just doubt

If only you could see lil me, That the pain you bury doesn’t define who you’ll be. I wish I could have held you, when your heart was full of fear, And told you it’s okay to let out all your heavy tears. The weight of all these memories doesn’t have to break you now, Together we can rise above we’ll learn to take a bow.

The strength to stand up tall, to rise above the stars,
To let the light seep in, to share our hidden scars.
So hold on just a while, we’re still learning how to be,
And I promise that I’ll fight now, for myself and my little me.

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Answer 1

aww stop this is cute. i like when people make writing like these. telling your younger self what should've happened or what you could've done. and apologize for the things that didn't go well. This is good. I like your writing. Sooo goodjobb

Answer 2

this is so deep and relatable. I love how you talked about your younger self and expressed your feelings asw. this is really good.🫶

Answer 3

Its great fr