A poem I wrote (lmk your thoughts!!)

Life is bright and mysterious
it is wild and free, with lots of highs and lows,
turns and swirls, a story from a start to an end.

Sometimes its soft, like a gentle breeze,
other times are hard, like crashing seas
but through it all, we find our own path way,
in each day and night, in everyday.

Days are momentary, years rush past
like shooting stars, they fade so quick,
we learn, we grow , we fall,
Yet we still move on and give our all.

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A poem I wrote (lmk your thoughts!!)

Life is bright and mysterious
it is wild and free, with lots of highs and lows, 
turns and swirls, a story from a start to an end.

Sometimes its soft, like a gentle breeze,
other times are hard, like crashing seas
but through it all, we find our own path way,
in each day and night, in everyday.

Days are momentary, years rush past
like shooting stars, they fade so quick,
we learn, we grow , we fall, 
Yet we still move on and give our all.

iluvpanda · Answer

YURRRR, dis poem is a rlly gud description of life, beautifully written ❤

theydontknowmelly · Answer

@iluvpanda wrote:

YURRRR, dis poem is a rlly gud description of life, beautifully written ❤

thankss

ShadowKid3 · Answer

it sounds blunt and lacks most emotions, the rhyming scheme and words used make it sound sort of artificial. for these reasons I have to rate it a 3/10.