danielfootball123:
Poem about a certain month of my life Driving to a destination wasting all creation said to go declined yet went the second I saw her I knew she was mine her beautiful eyes and pretty face Respect to her respect to her
danielfootball123:
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danielfootball123:
This one is trash 😠still rate it
14X30:
It's at least a solid 5/10. You could do a lot better by putting some rhyme scheme in there or by putting together some more words. It doesn't need to be just 2 sentences with less than 5 words. it can be upwards of 7 sentences and like 100+ words. you've got this. Basic poem idea though is amazing! Keep up the good work!
SaltySuga:
3/10, I can understand the message but you could have worded it much better and created a flow to it
SsTDOGRednek:
theydontknowmelly:
2/10 it doesnt rlly make sense, maybe add more details and rhythm it would be much better like the others said, overall not bad for a beginning.
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bestguy:
Eye Level poem The world looms large, a towering stage, Where giants stride and stories rage.
singlelesbain15:
Thought about this poem how do you guys like it TRAPPED Depression is like a dark
willowjade:
wrote this last night lmk what you think She just wanted to feel pretty. Sure she was called pretty by her parents.