Poem about a certain month of my life
Driving to a destination
wasting all creation
said to go
declined yet went
the second I saw her
I knew she was mine
her beautiful eyes
and pretty face
Respect to her
respect to her
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danielfootball123:
@uknownprttyfacekayla @graysonunderwoods
danielfootball123:
This one is trash ðŸ˜
still rate it
14X30:
It's at least a solid 5/10. You could do a lot better by putting some rhyme scheme in there or by putting together some more words. It doesn't need to be just 2 sentences with less than 5 words. it can be upwards of 7 sentences and like 100+ words. you've got this. Basic poem idea though is amazing! Keep up the good work!
SaltySuga:
3/10, I can understand the message but you could have worded it much better and created a flow to it
SsTDOGRednek:
@saltysuga wrote:
3/10, I can understand the message but you could have worded it much better and created a flow to it
I agree, if it had more rhythm, depth, and tone to it, it would be much better. Except I would give it a 4 or 5/10. The overall message is what makes it better. We have all been in a situation where we feel like that about a specific person. I would like to see what other poems you can come up with!
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theydontknowmelly:
2/10 it doesnt rlly make sense, maybe add more details and rhythm it would be much better like the others said, overall not bad for a beginning.