need suggestions on how to make the slide show better. (its my final grade for this class so its really important)

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gelphielvr · Answer

the presentation -

gelphielvr · Answer

Rubric -

Spectrum · Answer

I just want to say I love the theme, it really pops and grabs my attention. (:

SsTDOGRednek · Answer

There are some grammar errors (You said: "My favorite subject would b
biology." ) On the 5th slide space the two sentences out. If you have Grammarly you can try to make your slides make more sense or whatever.

SsTDOGRednek · Answer

I hope this helps you out!

SsTDOGRednek · Answer

@gelphielvr wrote:

Did what I said help?

gelphielvr · Answer

@sstdogrednek wrote:

@gelphielvr wrote:

Did what I said help?

yes thank you - I fixed the mistakes but I would still prefer if some other people would look at it

SsTDOGRednek · Answer

Makes sense, happy to help!

NaiNoah · Answer

Honestly it looks pretty good, i cant really find anywhere where I would need to critique anything. Good job

KnoxxyBoy · Answer

idk, I feel like it needs a couple more slides but I'm not really sure what you would put in them.... it just feels a little too short for a final grade ya know?

gelphielvr · Answer

@knoxxyboy wrote:

idk, I feel like it needs a couple more slides but I'm not really sure what you would put in them.... it just feels a little too short for a final grade ya know?

Yeah it's definitely a little short but our teacher didn't want us to go over 10 slides. Do you think that expanding on the goal slides would be a good idea? so that it looks a little fuller

KnoxxyBoy · Answer

I feel like you could combine short and long term goals ito on slide and then you could add another slide after that

KnoxxyBoy · Answer

and yeah def expand if you can

SsTDOGRednek · Answer

Honestly, Yeah. Expand it if you can. That'll help too.

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