Question

The past that was hidden, had no time to be given. The world knew your story, forever changed by the glory. You told me I was weak, but I only reached my peak. I'm higher than what you thought, could've never been bought. I'm better, two words, only thing that puts me apart from you is My Story. My Story. Nothing will ever change you, you won't change your view. So neither will I about you, we were something, now we got nothing, this chapter closed and My new chapter begins. Without drama, without pain, just pure love, like a flying dove.

Answer 1

The second part was good. Overall it needs a little bit of work but I like the idea nice job

Answer 2

No problem. Some things you can try are, like, play on words and things that really match what you are rhyming with.

Answer 3

Nice Job