My thoughts

Sometimes i feel cold left in a room locked up
Staring at the ceiling like im slowly falling
All my work turns to failure
Sometimes i think to myself
Was i meant to find love
Ima a balloon being popped
The sound of a burst filling the room
Crys falling down my cheek as i think
Was i meant to find love
Or was it all a mistake
I get the feeling that i dont matter to most
I try and try but whats the point
Ill just end up locked up staring at the ceiling pitch black
Slowly falling like im a meter falling in slow motion
As tears fall down my cheek was i meant to be
The sound of yelling the thoughts filling my head crying
Feeling like i mean nothing
I just wish i wish people loved me
Im so lost stuck in my thoughts
The laughter coming from behind telling me i mean nothing
Left to rot by myself
My thoughts

Question

My thoughts

Sometimes i feel cold left in a room locked up
Staring at the ceiling like im  slowly falling
All my work turns to failure 
 Sometimes i think to myself
Was i meant to find love 
Ima a balloon being popped 
The sound of a burst filling the room
Crys falling down my cheek as i think
Was i meant to find love 
Or was it all a mistake 
I get the feeling that i dont matter to most
I try and try but whats the point
Ill just end up locked up staring at the ceiling pitch black 
Slowly falling like im a meter falling in slow motion 
As tears fall down my cheek was i meant to be 
The sound of yelling the thoughts filling my head crying 
Feeling like i mean nothing 
I just wish i wish people loved me 
Im so lost stuck in my thoughts 
The laughter coming from behind telling me i mean nothing
Left to rot by myself
My thoughts

IzzyCookie · Answer

This is beautiful! Is it a poem for a figurative writing class? If so, this is great!

emmarose · Answer

no just thoughts

SaltySuga · Answer

Instead of "ima balloon" it should be "Im a balloon"

addison123456 · Answer

I love this poem. it is really good. it could be a pov

XShawtyX · Answer

Very nice

JOSEPHh · Answer

@addison123456 wrote:

I love this poem. it is really good. it could be a pov

most def

JOSEPHh · Answer

rlly love it tho

DemonKinge · Answer

@emmarose wrote:

no just thoughts

you know I feel how you feel tbh life sucks being hurt sucks. You and I both know that people are mean and don't know how people are like most people get hurt easily like I do the fact is there's not really much we can do to fix things no matter how much we try. people are who they are people think they can treat others with no respect and expect to get away with it when really that's not how life is ment to be we were all brought here to help each other to survive and grow a community. Most people don't realize that and most people who are bullying people were brought to this place by mistake, or maybe they just don't care about others. Like I said not much we can do but to stick to ourselves.