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addison123456:

The string needs to be cut but what happens when it gets too thick? I tied a string to my finger, A tiny thread, a whisper, Hoby Wayne Stuart, he’s the one, He leaves, then returns, just to be gone. Each time he comes back, I hold him tight, Pulling the string to make it right, But he slips through my grasp once again, A flicker, a shadow, then nothing but rain. He comes back stronger, each time, A knot in my chest, a tangled rhyme, I keep holding on, though I know, Hoby will leave, and the string will go. And I’ll tie it again, like I always do, The thread of him, both old and new. He leaves, he comes, the string’s pulled thin, But it’s the only way to feel him again.

Daze01:

awwwwwwwwww...i feel that girl.. <3

addison123456:

thank you. it makes me think of my ex and how he was

Daze01:

awww dang.... <3

addison123456:

poems hit hard when its about an ex.

SaltySuga:

Hoby wayne stuart is such a disgusting name

forgetmylife:

@saltysuga wrote:
Hoby wayne stuart is such a disgusting name
😭😭😭

Lostheartislostagain:

So cool!

addison123456:

@saltysuga wrote:
Hoby wayne stuart is such a disgusting name
ur not wrong.

addison123456:

@lostheartislostagain wrote:
So cool!
thank youuuu

LoverGIRL1:

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madi33:

keep the string on don't cut it it was on for a reason

xXAikoXx:

W

addison123456:

@madi33 wrote:
keep the string on don't cut it it was on for a reason
but it had to be cut or it was gonna kill them. and u are right

addison123456:

@xxaikoxx wrote:
W
thnxxxxx

emilysmith1105:

good poem slay

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