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uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

Here I am, all alone,
no place left to call home.
Lying still in this hospital bed,
asking why I’m not dead.

The walls close in, the night won’t speak,
my body’s tired, my soul feels weak.
Pain drips slow through every vein,
every breath another bargain with pain.

I’ve screamed in silence, I’ve begged the dark,
looking for even the smallest spark.
If this is hell, then hear me now
I’m still breathing, I don’t know how.

So let the morning find my scars,
let them teach me how to survive the dark.
I’m not done yet, I won’t give in
there’s light ahead… I’ll live to see it win.

addison123456 · Answer

this really hit me hard. Makes me think your really hurting to have written this. Keep it up queen. you are outstanding with this.

uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

@addison123456 wrote:

this really hit me hard. Makes me think your really hurting to have written this. Keep it up queen. you are outstanding with this.

Thanks addi ❤️ I'm J's lwk tired of being in n out of hospitals fr

addison123456 · Answer

@uknownprttyfacekayla wrote:

@addison123456 wrote:

this really hit me hard. Makes me think your really hurting to have written this. Keep it up queen. you are outstanding with this.

Thanks addi ❤️ I'm J's lwk tired of being in n out of hospitals fr

don't give up because regardless of what anyone says you matter to so many people. Im always here to talk so come talk to me girly. it wont bother me. I'd rather have you talk to me the then hear u aren't ok. I'm here

uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

@addison123456 wrote:

@uknownprttyfacekayla wrote:

@addison123456 wrote:

this really hit me hard. Makes me think your really hurting to have written this. Keep it up queen. you are outstanding with this.

Thanks addi ❤️ I'm J's lwk tired of being in n out of hospitals fr

don't give up because regardless of what anyone says you matter to so many people. Im always here to talk so come talk to me girly. it wont bother me. I'd rather have you talk to me the then hear u aren't ok. I'm here

Thank you sm ❤️

addison123456 · Answer

anytime ❤

Midnight97 · Answer

It's really good cousin, I know the pain in it really, just stay strong everything will turn out fine, love you fam 💖🖤🖤

uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

@midnight97 wrote:

It's really good cousin, I know the pain in it really, just stay strong everything will turn out fine, love you fam 💖🖤🖤

Love you too cuz n thanks 🩵

Midnight97 · Answer

@uknownprttyfacekayla wrote:

@midnight97 wrote:

It's really good cousin, I know the pain in it really, just stay strong everything will turn out fine, love you fam 💖🖤🖤

Love you too cuz n thanks 🩵

You're welcome cous 🖤

xjacob · Answer

This is so awesome nice job and stay strong and stay safe

uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

@xjacob wrote:

This is so awesome nice job and stay strong and stay safe

Thanks 🫶🏽

xjacob · Answer

welcome stay safe

emmamyersglazer · Answer

decent