Just good....

Today was good
not the great kind of good
just good where you still feel tired

People ask if I’m okay
I say I am
but am I

I don’t know
I feel different
like the world doesn’t feel real anymore

I keep moving
work, school, laughing
holding myself together in public

until I’m alone
I fall apart in dark spots
not dramatic
just heavy

Do I want to be saved
or do I just want to be unseen

I don’t want people
to look at me
and see what’s cracked

until then
I stay
breathing
hoping
counting small reasons
to keep going
even when tomorrow feels far away

Question

Just good....

Today was good
not the great kind of good
just good where you still feel tired

People ask if I’m okay
I say I am
but am I

I don’t know
I feel different
like the world doesn’t feel real anymore

I keep moving
work, school, laughing
holding myself together in public

until I’m alone
I fall apart in dark spots
not dramatic
just heavy

Do I want to be saved
or do I just want to be unseen

I don’t want people
to look at me
and see what’s cracked

until then
I stay
breathing
hoping
counting small reasons
to keep going
even when tomorrow feels far away

seeker · Answer

this is beautifully written and well this line counting small reasons to keep going ... great

Jake1235 · Answer

this is an amazing poem well done keep going

unknownnnnnn · Answer

@seeker wrote:

this is beautifully written and well this line counting small reasons to keep going ... great

thank uu

unknownnnnnn · Answer

@jake1235 wrote:

this is an amazing poem well done keep going

thank uuuu

Bounty · Answer

omgg good jobbbb love it hope ur ok girlie you got this you should keep writting

unknownnnnnn · Answer

@bounty wrote:

omgg good jobbbb love it hope ur ok girlie you got this you should keep writting

thank u sm

Ferrari · Answer

This is awesomesauce

Daze01 · Answer

u wanna be saved luv.....but its ur choice

xjacob · Answer

this is a good poem  awesome sauce

XxXGhostXxX · Answer

Quit while ahead