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guys I'm back~ with a new song that I need your guys opinions on! (it's still a work in progress)

they say watch your step,
count your breaths
run if your caught~
sirens ringing
screams leaking
OUT.

walking alone
late.
At.
night.

running, hiding?
trying.
to.
fight.

there's no way out
one way in
you wont even know your inside
till you see the signs
saying
"don't walk in"
"you wont walk out"
there are things inside"
waiting~

searching for you
and you ALONE.
welcome to no mans land
and the danger zone~

they say stay inside
Do whatever you can to try and hide
if you hear knocking,
don't answer it
you need to do nothing but
SURVIVE.