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Rebels in Defiance

Qawalish is a village located in western Libya. Qawalish is a small village comprised of shops, houses and a mosque beside the only one road. The presence of war has been very noticeable here. There were no residents left in the village after the rebels chased away the pro-Qaddafi forces. The threat of lack of resources, and incoming explosive attack keep the residents from returning to their town. But even if they return what would they find? Houses were on fire, stores had been looted and vandalized. Rebel trucks were taking stolen goods away f

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can you review my piece?

Rebels in Defiance

Qawalish is a village located in western Libya. Qawalish is a small village comprised of shops, houses and a mosque beside the only one road. The presence of war has been very noticeable here. There were no residents left in the village after the rebels chased away the pro-Qaddafi forces. The threat of lack of resources, and incoming explosive attack keep the residents from returning to their town. But even if they return what would they find? Houses were on fire, stores had been looted and vandalized. Rebel trucks were taking stolen goods away f

anonymous · Answer

In the second sentence "only one" is redundant. I would suggest writing "the only road that travels through the town." The third sentence I would change "has been" to "is." This is because I believe you meant to say that, as of now, you can see war in the town. I would also change the fifth sentence to "The threat of lack of resources and of an incoming explosive attack..." One more correction is to change the comma in the seventh sentence to a semicolon (Houses were on fire; stores had been looted and vandalized.).

anonymous · Answer

''IT''in the 2nd sentence