Question

Having a sense of being different make it difficult to belong

Answer 1

i need some one to proofread and correct my essay.

Answer 2

Good job! You sometimes do not finish sentences when one thought is dealt with and over. Make a point once in a while.... "I go over things again and again. Just to make sure. I guess, I am pretty nervous. "Otherwise: Great Story.

Answer 3

I'm proofing and editing this document as I write...

There are a lot of issues grammatically that make me confused about what it is you mean in some passages. In paragraph 2, you write " I go down to the kitchen and get some cereal and milk and think, while I almost finish up my breakfast, my dad would be yelling at me saying “hurry up you can’t be late for first day of school!”

Do you mean that your father actually interrupts your breakfast of cereal and milk? Or do you REMEMBER a day when he does?

Answer 4

Here, I cleaned it up and fixed some of the sentence structure. Compare your original and take some notes. If you have any questions as to why I changed the things that I did, let me know, I'm willing to explain.

As a note, you are writing about the past in the present tense and it sounds a bit awkward because of that, though it's not incorrect. It's just my personal preference. Good work and good luck in your school.