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would i get an A on this?

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ARGHHHHH...i cant get it on...

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here u want me to copy and paste?

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yes

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k here

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Introduction: There are three parts of an ear, the external ear, the middle ear, and the inner ear. For this project, we shall be focusing mostly on the inner ear. In the inner ear, there are three parts. First comes the snail shaped Cochlea. The Cochlea functions the body’s hearing system. Secondly comes the Vestibule. The Vestibule connects both of the sense organs and is responsible for your body’s balance. The two sense organs in the ear are the Cochlea and the Semicircular Canals. These canals are meant to help keep on balance. We may be exploring through the inner ear for this project, but we shall be taking a closer look at the Vestibular System and Semicircular Canals.
The Vestibular System is responsible for your body’s balance. This system can detect the position and motion of the body’s head. Inside the Vestibular System are hair cells which bend in the opposite direction you spin. As the hair cells bend, they extend toward and into the Semicircular Canals.
The Semicircular Canals help sense direction, angle, and speed. For example the canals can sense whether you are moving up, down, forward, backward, or turning in circles. The canals can detect by using microscopic hair- like nerves. When sitting still, our fluid and hairs are at rest. But when moving, the liquid sways inside loops and triggers the hairs to send nerve signals to regions of our brain; which then causes the brain to recognize and interpret the initial move.
Dizziness begins when the fluid picks up speed within the canals, causing the hair cells to send signals to the brain after an abrupt stop. This then leads to the Vestibular Nystagmus. Vestibular Nystagmus is when the human eye uncontrollably “jiggles” because of the continued signals in the Semicircular Canals when the body stops moving.
In this project, I shall be testing the people’s reflexes of dizziness, and record how much their eyes “jiggle”, or Vestibular Nystagmus.

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wowzer thts long^

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lols..."jiggles"
all in all..PERFECTO JOB SISTAH
u did great!! learned a ton bout ears!!
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1000000 outta 10
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EEEEPP!!

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it sounds like a proffesor's work and a cool kid like my sistah all together...perfection

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he he he AREENA IS AWESOME

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It has mistakes in the essay, but I would give it an A even with the mistakes. One mistake I noticed is below

These canals are meant to help keep on balance.

on balance??? what is on balance??? Did you mean

These canals are meant to help keep balance.

take out the "on"

Also I noticed

For example the canals can sense whether you are moving up, down, forward, backward, or turning in circles

You need a comma after example.

For example, the canals can sense whether you are moving up, down, forward, backward, or turning in circles

You need the comma because there is a dependent clause and an independent clause

Anyways, there are a few other mistakes, but I did not point them out. The paper looks good, and I would give you an A, but it would be a low A. If I had to grade the paper, I would give you somewhere between a 90 to 94. Good Job

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o thanks! i knew something would pop up! do you have any other mistakes please? i have to get a high A on this. it is very important. and one more thing, its a report:-)

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nside the Vestibular System are hair cells which bend in the opposite direction you spin

You always put a comma before the word which. The word "who" is the only one that has an exception. So...

Inside the Vestibular System are hair cells, which bend in the opposite direction you spin.


Not sure where you are going with the sentence below

The canals can detect by using microscopic hair- like nerves

can detect by???????? does not make sense

I would say something like below
The canals detect by using microscopic hair like nerves.

OR

By using microscopic hair like nerves, the canals can detect particular vibrations.


The sentence below should not use a semicolon before which but just a comma. I also would join " When sitting still, our fluid and hairs are at rest." with the below sentence...


But when moving, the liquid sways inside loops and triggers the hairs to send nerve signals to regions of our brain; which then causes the brain to recognize and interpret the initial move.

How ever you do it, make sure you take the semicolon out and use a comma.

But when moving, the liquid sways inside loops and triggers the hairs to send nerve signals to regions of our brain, which then causes the brain to recognize and interpret the initial move.

Don't be afraid to make a big sentence. Use those conjunctions :-)

When sitting still, our fluid and hairs are at rest, but when moving, the liquid sways inside loops and triggers the hairs to send nerve signals to regions of our brain, which then causes the brain to recognize and interpret the initial move.

Just my 2 cents worth lol Have a good one

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what if i do this..
When sitting still, our fluid and hairs are at rest, but when moving, the liquid sways inside loops and triggers the hairs to send nerve signals to regions of our brain. This, then causes the brain to recognize and interpret the initial move.

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This, then causes the brain to recognize and interpret the initial move.

remove the comma after This and remove the word then because then is not needed and makes the sentence wordy. So.....

This causes the brain to recognize and interpret the initial move.

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It is wonderful! You did a good job!

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thank u thank u

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how did you attach the file in your orgional question?

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there is a button saying attach file

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when u post an answer